The Trillian Empire

[Raging Deadstar]

Awwww Hell! Is he in for it!

Very Good Chapter as usual, i like your style of writing! I enjoyed reading this, as i bet everyone else will! Great Writing!

I know it's pretty soon but i decided to rate you 5 stars, this is an amazingly good story!

[ June 21, 2003, 11:14: Message edited by: Senator Raging Deadstar ]

[Ragnarok]

Ok Clark, I'm going to have to hurt you if you keep addicting me to this story.

But great two chapters, my friend. I like your style of writing and you are developing your characters greatly. Keep it up!

[primitive]

Very, very good. I've payed good money for books not half this good.
Sure you hasn't done this before ?

My $ 0.02
With the quality you got here, its almost a pity to totally lock yourself into following a single game. It may be better to let the story progress a little more freely (but still within the SEIV universe).

[clark]

Thank you all for the praise, it is encouraging to say the least.

I must say that I feel my story here has a long way to go to compare to many of the other stories I have seen here.

I've never done any writing in the sci-fi genere- I've done a few short stories, but nothing like this. Ragnarock, Erax, and (I'm sorry, I can't find the thread to remind me of the authors name) the Remeorhaz story are models for what I am doing.

So anything you see here is becuase of THEIR effort.

I've been playing a few turns ahead, and I am still waiting to to get to the point where they go through the warp point. after that, I should be able to add some "thrills and spills" to the story line!

I am finding I play more conservativly this way, mainly becuase I have a ship full of people I am now invested in. How about you?

I should have an update (through the warp point) on Monday sometime... saty tuned.

[The FryeR K]

A good read...
A good story...
A good beginning...

Good Job

[The FryeR K]

sachmo is the author of Remorhaz