Once Upon The Stars (Updated 08-22-04)

Atrocities · #1 July 5th, 2004, 09:58 PM

Thanks, and Have fun with your mod.

[ July 05, 2004, 21:00: Message edited by: Atrocities ]

Atrocities · #2 July 7th, 2004, 10:00 AM

Hum, very little feed back means very few people are reading this story.

Is it that boring?

EvilGenius4ABetterTomorro · #3 July 7th, 2004, 07:14 PM

No, it's a great story! You just posted it over a holiday weekend and I myself just now found it. Just like "Empire of Man" stories. Just now found them. Location and timing kind of buried it. I'll be waiting.

sachmo · #4 July 8th, 2004, 03:28 PM

Atrocities,

Sorry for the lack of feedback! I was just able to read this today, but I have to agree with the accessment...the story is great and you are definately honing your writing skills!

Just keep writing, and we'll keep reading! You can bank on that.

Atrocities · #5 July 10th, 2004, 07:21 AM

Thanks for the kind words.

You are all far to generous.

XenoTheMorph · #6 July 18th, 2004, 02:03 PM

Atrocities your story is a must read!

I really do look forward to each new installment.

Atrocities · #7 July 19th, 2004, 11:53 PM

Thanks.

I have spent a lot of time figuring things out for the story, things that I never thought would matter, but do.

Like explaining why the Salideen Religion was so powerful and how it effected the very culture of the race. The reason the planet was named Pandora, and why there are no other humans or better yet why these ones were so primitive if they came from a space faring human culture.

It has been a lot of fun to write.

Atrocities · #8 August 17th, 2004, 06:22 AM

I just converted this to PDF format. It is 145 pages thus far. That is a lot of pages for a story that only about 25% written.