A War for the Stars

Taz-in-Space · #1 May 26th, 2003, 04:53 AM

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how do you like my new Grand Admiral Thrawn pic ?

Glowing red eyes in a blue body - kind of like a possessed zombie

...in other words: Great!

Andr�s · #2 May 26th, 2003, 05:15 PM

The good old Chiss grand admiral.

Raging Deadstar · #3 May 26th, 2003, 09:33 PM

I like these chapters, the empire grows stronger by the month! I just downloaded the sci-fi mod and i'm impressed, now i have a better idea on what you're doing, But this story is going superbly.

narf poit chez BOOM · #4 May 27th, 2003, 07:28 AM

narf posting to say still reading, still like.
nothing else to say.

Atrocities · #5 May 28th, 2003, 01:40 AM

In case your interested I found a good site to post your story for other sci-fi fans to read and offer helpful critisims.

http://speculativevision.com/forum/Messages/29/31.html

I posted the Prelude to Once Upon The Stars and was surprised to get three very insightful and helpful responses. It hurts, but boy are they helpful.

Erax · #6 May 28th, 2003, 01:56 AM

Atrocities : Thanks, will investigate.

To all readers : Have a little patience, folks. A LOT of stuff happened on 2404.9, I'm still trying to sort it out chapter-wise.

Erax · #7 May 27th, 2003, 04:02 PM

Seeker II, Captain's log, SGY 2404.9:

Our present location is Chorax, a barren system consisting of a few asteroid clouds drifting around the solid core remnant of an eons-old destroyed star. We are on a course back to Arkonne and then to the hyperconduit on the other side of that system. Sector astrographers hoped to find a connection to the Tachung system, but there is none.

The other Arkonne hyperconduit is more promising. If the system on the other side connects to HolLastin, we can take that route and resupply at Klozar.

CODED TRANSMISSION
From: Dr. Lorn Joh, Sector Research Division
To: Admiral Wiers

Syned I, 2404.9

Admiral,

Nova VIII has finally landed on Klozar VII. Our research teams, which joined the colony ship's crew when they stopped here to resupply, were out of the craft before the engines had cooled. They soon located the source of Captain Stran's energy readings - a huge, long-abandoned fortress-like structure located on an otherwise unremarkable plain.

Their initial findings indicate that this was a ground-to-space defense installation of some kind, similar to our own anti-orbital ion cannons. But the grand prize was the main emplacement itself, a nearly intact ion beam weapon. We are still analyzing tha data being transmitted to us by the onsite research teams, but we have ascertained that while this weapon is similar to the Empire's ion cannons, it is much more efficient.

I need not tell you the implications of this. We may have in our hands the first artifact that confirms the existence of the Ancients - and if the Ancients did in fact exist, then their servant races may also be real.

[ May 28, 2003, 12:13: Message edited by: Chief Engineer Erax ]