Space Empires Volume 1: Space Empire

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February 26th, 2004, 07:47 PM

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Re: Space Empires Volume 1: Space Empire

Sabin, here's an example of what I was talking about, using a piece of your most recent work. Notice that I removed 3 commas.

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The power of the Space Empire has seemingly grown greatly ever since the Grand Master has implemented his agendas. What agendas? Well, one of them is Operation Sabercat. It's goal is to strengthen the borders of the Space Empire so that invasion and general inflitration would not be possible. How it does so is by placing a trio of Saber MK.IIIs in each system, which would triple the amount of combat vessels the Space Empire has available for use.

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