Skill Cards - The NEW Look

Peter Bogdasarian · #1 November 21st, 2002, 02:52 AM

Looks really nice to me. Thanks for posting it!

Psitticine · #2 November 21st, 2002, 04:48 AM

The grammar needs work

but the art design is great!!

May I make an text editing suggestion? How about the following for the copy?

Melee attacks by units stacked with this Leader have triple Firepower against enemies who lacked an LOS to the attackers at the beginning of the impulse.

Psitticine, the Humble Editing Parrot

MichaelCooney · #3 November 21st, 2002, 04:08 PM

I'll back Psitticine up on this. Matter of fact, I recommend you email all the card text to him for a double check - he did a hell of a job on the TWE manual.

The artwork is sweet...

[ November 21, 2002, 14:09: Message edited by: Mike Cooney ]

Psitticine · #4 November 21st, 2002, 07:46 PM

I'd sure be happy to help out if I can.

Bamse · #5 November 22nd, 2002, 03:13 PM

Like it or not, here come my 2cents...

When reading "LOS", some people think 'line of sight' others think 'el oh ess'. So choosing between 'a LOS' and 'an LOS' isn't easy. Either way it will always seem wrong to someone. Why not just avoid the problem, leave out the indefinite article, and write: ...who lacked LOS...

Mark H. Walker · #6 November 27th, 2002, 11:41 AM

Hi All,

The new card does look good. And my grammar could be better. Of course the grammar is "beta."

Psitticine I'd love for you to take a look at the card text. Bamse has it right now, but would you like to have a shot at it after that?

Best,
Mark

Psitticine · #7 November 30th, 2002, 05:58 AM

Sure, I'd be happy to give it a go-over.