Once Upon The Stars (Updated 08-22-04)

Raging Deadstar · #1 August 23rd, 2004, 08:00 AM

Hey Atrocities, I've been meaning to reread this story, I'm just curious if you started it again or something... It's a bit confusing. Is the first chapter still the first chapter?

Help out my poor confuzzled mind and I'll try and get through this collossal piece.

Edit: As for Grammar, I'm not the best at it but when you send me the revised chapters for SpaceEmpires.Net I can have a look through them for you and send back any bits that make no sense

Edit 2: Ahh, I missed that! It seems you Just Sent me the Revised Chapter

Atrocities · #2 August 23rd, 2004, 08:12 AM

Actually, I have a new Version for you RD. I can email it to you later today. I should have Chapter 2 done later today.

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Raging Deadstar · #3 August 23rd, 2004, 08:29 AM

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Atrocities said:
Actually, I have a new Version for you RD. I can email it to you later today. I should have Chapter 2 done later today.

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I know, I just got it. I'll be out for the next 4 or 5 hours today, so Any more revisions won't get missed

Edit: And a Promotion for me

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Atrocities · #4 August 23rd, 2004, 08:46 AM

Congradulations Lt Colonel RD.