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Old October 29th, 2004, 07:42 AM
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Wow, great stuff. Your Icarans certainly are uncompromising. It's nice to see someone portray a culture of vicious, expansionist bastards rather than another galaxy full of boringly enlightened Trek/ Manticoran style utopians.
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I have to agree, great stuff. Looking forward to more.
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The next chapter will come tomorrow most likely as I want to flesh out my ideas of how to write it (It's gonna be a big one trust me).

Heh well if you don't mind me saying so, and if this doesn't make me sound a little freaky. Humans are Humans and Icara is in an era where a single battle squadron could destroy an entire planet and kill you entire nation if you let down your guard so they don't have room to be compromising or "enlightened" so although by my story's viewpoint they are the "good guys" it's more accurate to say they are survivors and if they have to eliminate others they will if it ensures that survival.

I never understood why so many writers assume that a futuristic Humanity would be so peaceful and willin to coexist with others, I mean when you stop and think about it sure we are more likely to become much more merciful and "enlightened" when it comes to "our own kind" that being nations but when humanity spreads to the stars (if ever) do they honestly think every colony will have the same heritage or beleifs as each other? I doubt it.
Most likely something like the HH Universe will happen where Humanity divides into seperate "star nations" and although I doubt the future would be nothing but war all the time I doubt it will only be "evil aliens" that want to wipe us out lol.

The Icaran galaxy in this story is somewhat restricted to game terms (I.E. My "cold war" with a certain faction is entirely roleplay and the AI probobly doesn't realize it is a cold war) but as far as the story its self goes, these are colonies that launched from earth Hundreds of years ago and are now stepping out to find a galaxy that is theirs for the taking and where other human factions and even an alien faction "phong" are intent on the same prize.
And to any nation that has the chance to rule not just it's own planet but an entire galaxy deciding to be oh so goody and peaceful with everyone around them will probobly result in their being annexed by a power that did not feel so "enlightened".

Icara is brutal where brutality is required (unlike the Federation which always managed to show compassion even where brutality would have ended the war much soon) and the Empire needs resources for it's economy to survive so colonies are needed for that.
And let's not forget that a world with Icara's very low infant mortality rate and advanced medicines and life prolonging treatments will have population growth that can't be handled by one planet forever, and so more worlds are also required for land or else you'd have overcrowding and poverty everywhere.

Anyway should I have saved that for the storyline or is it okay that I explained Icara's motives and "justifications" to you out of the story?
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[quote] I'll explain the look of Icaran ships later for those who havn't seen the pics I displayed on-line. but for now I'm off to read HH
Oh and although I will likely play more then one turn at a time I'm going to take this story slowly enough to make sure it's good [quote]


As I understand you actually play this games which you describes. If so, maybe it is possible for you to put some .gam file on the net every 10 turns or so (or if something important happens)

So we could read the story, and take a look on the empire if we like , and maybe have some questions about stuff you didn't wrote about (yet).

And offcourse we could see the shipsets off all those Humans you found...................

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As Promised
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2403.2-2404.0
“Praetor Lysander we no longer have a choice, the Handra supply base must be re-colonized if we do not keep a permanent fleet base in that system we are just asking for those Phong to invade us!.” Admiral Lord Tyson Babcock had a habit-a rather annoying one as far as Lysander was concerned-of keeping his voice low and polite even when he was chewing someone’s *** off, and since day one of the first colony’s launch he had condemned those lords who overruled the Admiralty about sending millions of civilians to the original Haden base.
“Praetor I agree with Tyson on this matter, the original colonization was the biggest blunder our nation has made so far and I think not sending another expedition would be even more foolish.” Alexander Hallice, Lord High Admiral of the entire Icaran Royal Navy was far more stubborn and held a lot more credit then his lesser known colleague within the nobility of Icara and as such his word on any matter could shake even Lysander’s views around.
“Opening that doorway now would lead to a war we can not win, our resources at this time are to unstable and our navy too small to repel any invasion from that particular region of space Your Highness, however I do not believe we should send this colony into the fray unguarded like our lordships did it’s predecessor.” Hallice hid the traces of a grimace of disgust by taking a sip of the hot Icaran coffee that he had all too rarely these days.”
“Isn’t HMS Saber on location Sir?” Babcock raised his right eyebrow as his superior cocked his head in a manner he often did while he thought about important matters.
“Yes but she is low on supplies and munitions, and I doubt a single frigate could neutralize an entire Phong squadron, don’t you?” Just the tone in his voice as he looked over to his Praetor suggested that he knew Saber wouldn’t stand a chance on that post alone no matter what any arrogant lordship thought.
“You realize Admirals that to authorize something that would cost that much money and that many resources I would have to grant the house of lords permission to send a full fledged colony expedition don’t you?” Lysander frowned as he thought of the amount of pain his *** would be in over the next few days trying to convince the lords to at least minimize the number of colonists they sent.
“Well then our lordships would certainly want better defense wouldn’t they your highness?” Hallice said with a distinctive grin as he finished sipping his coffee and placed his cup gracefully on the table. Hallice was almost 80 Terran Years old but thanks to modern medicine he looked like a man a third his age, and his mind certainly held every ounce of wit and tactical knowledge it had over 50 years ago.
“What are you proposing Alexander?” Lysander asked in a deliberate manner as he thought about just how much money this whole operation would cost his Nation, not to mention the time and resources.
“Oh, well Admiral HMS Saber should certainly stay on station, our supply base on Handra-the new name given it by The Admiralty-can certainly fix her up and get her in shape once we’ve established even a basic infrastructure there.” Hallice paused a moment cocking his head in thought as numbers and names plied through his rapier like mind.
HMS Enterprise Can certainly leave within the month, the asteroid damage she sustained pulling that freighter out of the Swift asteroid belt will be repaired by then, and I can guess Ross would like to get out in real space again instead of getting stuck at home with one of only three destroyers in the fleet.
And I beleive HMS Farrogot can be ready a month after that, considering the construction time of a colony ship and it’s slower speeds compared to our new destroyers, I think both destroyers will be on station only a month after initial colonization.” The High Admiral hummed quietly as he thought.
“And I think the next two destroyers built at Icara and Brandenburg could arrive there in about 6 months so we’ll have an entire effective battle group there within a years time.” Alexander grinned again as his Praetor began to nod. Braddock too was nodding. A decent battle group of four destroyers and a frigate would definitely be enough to guard that border, and maybe even go on the offensive, as long as they could keep the lords out of this.
“Good idea Alexander, I do believe I can overrule the Lords on the matter of numbers of ships easily, after all the defense of our Nation is the only concern we should have right now, and if any of those Lords or Ladies turn this down I’ll remind them of the mistakes the collegues made with the first colony.” Lysander nearly spat as he considered those five lords who now hung dead and cryopreserved outside of the Admiralty building (showing just how the navy felt about fools), those five who had gone behind the backs of the house of Lords and given “unofficial” permission for several companies to ready a colony for Haden, those same five lords who then refused to allow a naval presence to escort the colony ship under the excuse of it “making the colony ship a target for hostile forces”. Instead 1 million soldiers and 31 million civilians were blown apart by a single enemy frigate that could have been stopped by Saber!
“Admiral do you believe that Saber can protect that base by herself before those warships arrive?” Lysander’s tone was bitter as nightmare images rushed into his memory, the images taken from Haden by remote drones.
“Highness, I believe Saber can protect her from any one ship, and possibly any two ships we’ve seen those yellow bastards throw at us thus far.” Hallice said with an unusual gusto as he absently fixed one of the stars on his collar.
“Then Admirals, you have a go, just get those two destroyers ready for deployment before I have to talk to the lords, or at least make it look like they are ready.” Lysander said with a wink as he guided his guests to the door.

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“Sir, now that we have approval for the deployment of an entire squadron to Handra do you believe we can get the go ahead on an assault into Fornax?” Babcock asked quietly as he and the High Admiral walked along the great corridor of the Capital Building.
‘I think His Highness will give us permission to do anything it takes to defend Handra base, if that happens to include going into Fornax and removing any threatening presence in said system.” The glean in Hallice’ eyes was clear as he looked at his junior officer and smiled, he liked Babcock though he really couldn’t figure out just what about the energetic young man (only 42 E-Years) he liked."Then so be it." He finished with a smile.
“Excellent Sir!, with your permission I’ll get together with Captain’s Ross and Holly later and discuss possible maneuvers they can take to force the Phong into making themselves a “reasonable threat”. Babcock’s own face lit as he considered the possibilities. Though he would have preferred to be in the field himself, commanding a fleet in battle, but unfortunately for him and just about seventy-two percent of all IRN personnel there just weren’t enough ships to crew much less form a full “fleet” worthy of the name….though within a few years that would hopefully all be changed.
“Very good Admiral, I’ll have discuss the new naval budget with the House of Commons and the rest of the Admiralty tomorrow morning.” The smile turned to a sour grimace as the Admiral considered the meeting that lay before him, he hated talking about money and “resource allocation” but now a days that seemed to be more of a hot topic for him then strategy and command.
The two Admirals talked idly as they walked down the long corridors to head to their respective duties.

Five months later the new colony ship set down on Handra base and Captain Sandra Fowler’s ship turned her running lights to a blinking row pattern signaling her salute to the nobleman aboard her.
A month later the destroyer pair of Enterprise and Farrogot arrived to take up station around Handra, both ships signaling salute to their “little sister” as Saber was affectionately called by the two destroyer’s crews.

2404.1-4
“Sir incoming missile at point three, oh five niner!” Tactical officer Remeraz blurted as the main battle screen in Enterprise's bridge showed 3 yellow dots appear at a range of just under five thousand clicks.
“Helm, Evasive maneuver Jager Nine two.” Ross voice was icy as his helmsman began twisting and turning the Icaran destroyer in an attempt to evade the enemy missiles that were closing at two thousand clicks per second.
The third missile had Ross far more worried as it’s glowing light code closed at over one thousand clicks faster then the other two….the light code signaling the missile’s approach was moving far to fast and suddenly Enterprise rocked and shuddered as the impact alarms blared.
“Sir Cannon one is gone, we’ve also lost missile tube two! And starboard engine three.” Commander Pallins sounded shocked but as she read off the damage list she seemed angry that her ship had been caught with it’s pants down by that third missile.
“Thank you Commander, What is the status of Saber?” Ross watched the holotank intently as the frigates own missiles closed on one of the enemy ships.
“Her port cannon battery is down, she’s leaking atmosphere on two decks and a quarter of her crew is dead or wounded sir.” The comn officer of the watch seemed like he was about to wet his pants but then a brief cheer from the weapons commander made him jump clear out of his skin as he whirled around to look a the holotank.
“Got one sir, the second enemy ship is down sir!”
“Thank you mister Saunderson please try not to distract our other officers.” Ross snipped at the young officer and the man just about crapped his vac suit as he turned back to his station sheepishly.
“Sir Saber is gone.” Tactical said as the frigate’s light code winked out .
“Closing on enemy ship, baring three, two seven mark.” That same mechanical voice that had announced Saber’s destruction seemed to chant out the words as Tactical Officer Remeraz watched his displays like they were the only thing in the universe.
“Guns, take her out as we come to bare!”
“Aye skipper, cannon crews standing by, missiles locked…..firing in three…..two….one, birds away, cannons firing!” the missiles slid from their rack with a dull droning sound and the distinctive thumping of heavy cannons was almost musical in Ross’ ears as the enemy light code winked out in the holotank.
The lights on Enterprise’s bridge returned to normal and the damage codes winked off as the other ships of the squadron reactivated their transponders, winking their light codes back into existence on the holotank.
“All hands stand down battle stations, I repeat stand down battle stations. The drill is over.” Pallins said almost cheerfully as she started reading the computer’s assessment of their performance during the battle drill.

The Enterprise Battlegroup had been standing at Hadran station for three months so far and run twenty two battle drills with varying pairings on who played the opfor and who played the defender. The entire squadron had done rather well by her opinion though captain Fowler ended up with a grimace more often then not as her ship had been destroyed twelve of the past twenty drills and only destroyed one of the enemy ships every other time, But even Fowler had to realize that saber had done more then pull her weight in each drill.

“Alright ladies and gentleman let’s return to Hadran base, And good job to all.” Ross smiled at his exec and unzipped the vac suit that he had been wearing for the past six hours. They may save your life but they sure didn’t save your comfort, he thought as he felt “fresh” air blowing against his tunic again.
“Sarah you have the watch.”
“Aye sir have the watch.” Sarah was still cheerful as she unzipped her vac suit and sat in the comfortable captain's chair to take Enterprise into port.
Three months of peace on the Phong frontier had the odd effect of making the crews more nervous then having at least one stand up fight, because the anticipation of a Phong assault coming any day was just not what they were trained to deal with, so battle drills and various surprise inspections were a regular distraction and one of the few ways to keep them busy without burning them out. And quite frankly Sarah Pallins loved battle drills because they made sure her crew would not let Captain Ross down no matter what and if he wasn't let down then the Navy wouldn't be let down.

2404.5
It was 0200 when the first alerts began howling their warnings in the C3 center of Handra’s military base and within five minutes every civil and military alarm on the planet was triggered. Startled civilians went rushing for the local shelters why the local military personnel on the base rushed to their Posts.
Handra’s military governor, Lord Korey Aznoble entered the command center at a frantic pace the second he heard the first alarm, by time the civil alerts started up he was already standing over the holomap of the Handra system frowning.
‘This makes if fifteen minutes right roger?” Aznoble’s frown grew darker as the senior military officer, Commodore Roger McMan, nodded.
“M’Lord it is a single Phong frigate, and our battle group can easily destroy it, my fear is that it’s a trap of some kind, I’d rather not send the entire squadron to engage her because I don’t want to leave this planet unguarded.” The Commodore’s face grew pale as he remembered what had happened to Haden base.
“What do you suggest Commodore?” Aznoble frowned as he saw the light signature of the enemy frigate closing in on Handra. “Do we let that frigate come here and then have the squadron intercept it in orbit?” He asked as that ominous light signature continued to close in on his planet.
“Sir that would be a very bad idea, if our ships are not in exactly the right position when that ship arrives in orbit we could face massive casualties before they get into an intercept position. I recommend we send one of the destroyers to intercept it. I’d suggest Ross’ as he’s the most experienced combat officer we have on station at the moment.” McMan loathed the fact that he had to report to a man that was not military, especially one who did not understand the physics of space combat.
“Very Well Commodore dispatch Ross, if he fails, at leas we’ll have a fallback.” Aznoble grimaced again before leaving the Commodore’s side and walking over to a secondary command station to observe the deployment himself.

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Meanwhile in space the four warships had not been idle, their sensors had the advantage of not being hindered by atmosphere and Ross suspected that his crews had manned battle stations before the planetary commander even knew what was happening.
But when the message did come through Ross clenched his fists,the Commodore ordered his ship to engage an unknown enemy starship alone and worse then that he ordered him to intercept the enemy vessel at 20 light minutes, it would take any of the other warships at least a day to arrive and back him up should anything go wrong and by then they'd likely just find his wreckage.
Ross suspected that Lord Aznoble had something to do with the distance involved in the intercept because when it came down to it the man was a coward and wanted to keep battle as far away from him personally far more then he wanted to keep the battle away from Handra, a proper military officer would have ordered at most a 10 light minute intercept so that reinforcements could arrive in a shorter amount of time but even that would be pushing it for most admirals.
It had been one day at full thrust, with the enemy ship closing on their position the whole time and finally Enterprise was closing in on her target.
“Time to intercept two minutes fifteen seconds sir.” Tactical officer Ramerez chanted in his normal mechanical tone .
“All stations report full battle readiness sir.” Sarah said icily as she watched the status board.
“Thank you Commander….Tactical.” Ross said grimly as he waited anxiously for his ship’s first engagement.

The first volley of missiles streaked from the Destroyer’s prow launchers at just under 10,000 kilometers range, their drives glowed brilliantly like three tiny new stars as they carried their deadly payloads toward another tiny star that was not even visible from the bridge of HMS Enterprise.
The holotank showed a small red line appear from the enemy light dot signifying a long stream of point defense rounds pouring into space desperately clawing at the missiles that were closing in on it. The point defense go lucky once and nailed the sprint missile, unfortunately for the Phong warship the two more powerful missiles were already in too close and the Holotank on the Icaran destroyer showed two clear hits.

“Sir they are closing to cannon range, I don’t think we got their engines sir.” Remerez mechanical tone had a nervous edge to it as he watched the enemy ship close within visual range of the ship's cameras.
The bridge’s main monitor suddenly switched over from a star view to a magnified image of the enemy vessel. As they watched the magnified image the bridge crew saw three small bursts of light come from her port side and immediatly began to brace for the impact that was sure to follow.
The holotank clearly showed three incoming shells to match each of the bursts of light, causing Ross to squint sharply and grit his teeth as he realized that by time those objects appearedo on display the shells would already be far closer.
His ship rocked and loud explosions could be heard from other sections of the ship and the damage board came to life with color all across his ship.
“Sir, cannon crew two is gone, we’ve also lost the sprint missile launcher and two engines.” Remerez announced as the remaining cannon crews returned fire automatically, the ship’s remaining cannons roared in fury and sent a devastating broadside into the already damaged hull of the Phong Frigate, the first shot missed entirely but the second struck home in what must have been the enemy frigate’s control centers because she immediately started to list and spin out of control.
“Good shooting guns!” Ross’ professionally calm tone momentarily broken as he watched the enemy ship spin out of control sending debris and what looked like bodies hurling out into space.
As the bridge crew watched the third round impact the enemy ship’s hull a gasp of universal disbelief and morbid amusement ran through them, the third round impacted at an odd angle into the hole that had been caused by one of the heavy missiles that had impacted earlier and instead of punching another hole the shell bounced at least tree times inside the enemy ship causing multiple internal explosions at various points until the shot finally breached a weakened part of the hull and exploded 10 meters of the enemy ship’s hull.

“My Lord, can you believe that?” Sarah’s voice sounded oddly amused by the display and Ross himself felt a strange urge to laugh at the almost comical occurrence but his training did not let him forget that many of his crew had probably been killed in the broadside that dying bastard had spat into his vessel.
“Status of the enemy…..”Ross’ sentence was cut off as the enemy ship seemed to simply begin collapsing in on herself, the entire middle of the ship seemed to just crumple as if she had been grabbed by some giant hand and squeezed.
“Cancel that tactical.” Ross said as he tabbed a control on his personal command panel.
“Damage Control here.” Chief Engineer John Lee’s voice sounded harsh as he answered his Capatin.
“Status Lee?” was all Ross could croak out as he observed the damage board with a scowl
“Sir, aside from what you’ve already been informed about, we’ve lost our forward gfg and I lost an entire work party when that damned broadside blew a hole in our engine room.” His voice made him sound ten years older then he was as he mentioned the loss of an entire 18 man work crew, his work crew.
Four others had died and ten were wounded in the engagement but HMS Enterprise had survived the first live combat action any Icaran destroyer had taken part in, and she had won.
"All hands stand by, we are returning to port." Captain Ross said as "cheerfully' as he could manage as he took count of the price his ship had paid.

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2404.6-8
The citizens of Icaran worlds finally began to feel safe, their navy had thus far defeated all attempts of the Phong to encroach on Icaran territory. To ensure this peace remained however the Royal Navy set down a “tribute” that any company dispatching a colony ship would have to pay in order to purchase the rights to a world. 28 worlds already fell under the sway of the Icaran Empire and still more would soon follow as the massive “arc ships” launched from Icara, Brandenburg and Sparta.

2404.9
HMS Claw had been on patrol for nearly six months in the 6-11 system, blockading the warp point to unknown space when suddenly her detector grids began triggering multiple proximity and energy signature alerts.
“Sir unknown frigate baring three nine two point five, she’s jumped through the warp point and if her speed and course remain constant she’ll arrive in colony orbit in three days.” Tactical officer Malokov said hastily as Captain Wykok began tapping keys to bring up his own displays, the ship had an odd silhouette that was for sure but whether it was hostile or not was anybody’s guess.
“Comns, hail them, order them to stand down and identify themselves.”
“Aye sir transmitting now.” The young comn officer said stiffly as the unknown frigate continued heading out at full speed.
“Sir, I think it’s a human ship sir.” Chief weapons officer, Ensign Galler’ she began tabbing controls to send her data straight to the captain’s command repeater as she continued speaking. “Those are definitely human designed GFGs and her engine signature is similar to our own in too many ways for her to have been designed by xenos.” the young Ensign finished sounding rather sure of herself.
Wykok grudgingly agreed with the young Ensign, it was a human ship and that meant another Human Star Nation. Icara had not even seen another human nation in centuries and now suddenly one of their warships was on a vector that would take it straight to an Icaran colony, and worse then that she wasn’t responding to hails.

“Sir they are still not replying to hails, it’s possible that they are not on our frequency or that they don’t understand basic sir.” Com officer Griffon sounded almost wishful as he turned to his captain.
Wykok scowled as he thought, frantically trying to find any reasonable excuse for that ship to be ignoring him, but if it had been as simple as not being on his frequency any decent starship would at least have the proper detection nets to realize that a constant stream of information was being sent on another frequency, and any decent captain would have tried to send back SOME form of acknowledgement.
“We can’t risk that Ensign.” Wykok said bitterly as he shifted position uncomfortably in his chair and then looked over at his weapons officer.
“Guns, plot a missile intercept and fire.” He looked grim as he gave that order and made sure he ignored the look of shock on his crew’s faces.

“Missiles away sir.” The weapons officer said crisply as the familiar sound of a launch was heard throughout the ship.
Three objects sped away from the Icaran destroyer’s prow at huge velocities and seconds later the sprint missile impacted brilliantly on the engine housing of the unknown ship. A stream of point defense fire from the enemy frigate tore one of the larger ship killers right out of the stars unfortunately for her though the second one slammed into one of her cannons.

“Sir she’s returning fire with cannon!” The tactical officer said just as the holotank showed two shots pass the destroyer by meters.
“Let’s finish this before they get a second shot guns.” Wykok said gruffly as he watched the third enemy shell tear past his destroyer.

The cannon crews input their targeting data into the ship’s computers at amazing speed and within a second the gunnery officer’s panel showed all four cannons lit, signifying their target acquisition data. The gunnery officer pressed the data and four cannon shells burst forth from his ship at .2c.
“We have three hits sir!” The tactical officer announced as a massive hole was torn out of the enemy frigate.
A second broadside with the cannons soon broke the enemy ship to pieces sending wreckage and bodies into the void of space.
Little did the crew of HMS Claw know it but they had made the first contact with the Neo Star Empire the first of many Human Nations Icara would likely encounter on her way to supremacy of the galaxy.
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Thanks you guys I hope I can keep you entertained with the next chapter (also likely to be a LOOOONG chapter) which should be coming sometime either tomorrow or Wensday
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2405.1 A New Dawn
Goin base had been established in the Goin star system over two years ago for the purpose of establishing a forward supply base for the Exploration missions launched by the Royal Navy, but little did anyone on goin suspect just how important they would be to the future of Icara.
It was the third day of Tellus when the military Command attaché to Goin colony walked into the planetary governor’s office, his face pale with exertion as he had just run the full length of the government house corridor.
The Governor turned around to face the young officer grimly and opened his mouth as if he was about to say something before closing it again with a click as his eyes wondered back to the holodisplay on his desk teakwood desk.
Governor Lord Michael Averato was an older man at nearly 100 E-years, and because of his age h was among the first generation to receive the life prolonging surgery and drug that was now common practice, the first generation of treatments stopped the aging process at an older age then the newer generations and gray streaked the governor’s hair, but the man looked no less impressive at his two meter height and broad muscular marine features.
“Governor, Sir!” the young officer braced to attention and saluted his superior (both militarily and civilian) the tension in his voice spoke volumes, the military defense network had discovered the unknown drive signatures nearly three hours ago and although it was estimated that the five unknown ships would not arrive in Goin orbit for another three days the only Icaran warships were still five days away at maximum speed which made the military staff terrified as the planetary defenses were still months away from completion.
“Relax Lieutenant….we’ve still got time to attempt contact.” Averato’s voice was what one would expect from a man of his features, it was gruff and confident and could inspire confidence in the middle of a battlefield….for that is what he had once had to do, for Averato had been a Marine Sergeant 80 years ago during the “great war” which occurred when another colony ship stumbled across Icara and attempted to seize the jewel of a world for themselves, instead thanks to brave men and women of the Icaran military all those invaders found was death and defeat until they were forced to incorporate themselves into Icaran society.
“Yes General.”
“Now what is it that you came running here for?” That same gruff voice asked kindly as General Governor Averato handed the young army officer a glass of water and showed him to one of the big artificial leather chairs in front of his big desk.
“Sir they have already contacted us, they request we send a ship out to meet their task force.” The young army officer was still sweating but Averato suspected it was more out of nerves and anxiety then physical exertion.
“Well then how long ago did their message arrive Lieutenant?” Averato’s voice was calm as ever as this army officer who’s name he couldn’t seem to remember took a sip of water and reached into his breast pocket where he retrieved a data chip.
“About fourteen minutes ago sir, they requested to speak to an authority from our colony.” as he handed Averato the chip the officer took another deep sip of water and waited for his superior to finish playing the message.
After the message finished playing Averato looked up at the army officer with a grin “I think I need a sloop and a platoon of soldiers ready in a half hour Lieutenant.” his voice sounded thoroughly excited as the young man stood braced to attention and headed for the door.

The sloop Angela was privately owned by the VenStar corporation, but she was also the fastest intra-system craft in Goin and that meant even though she was totally unarmed she was the only choice. Her captain was somewhat less then thrilled when a platoon of army troopers arrived at his berth and informed him that he was going to take the planetary Governor to meet with an unknown government’s task force in his unarmed transport and let everyone within a kilometer radius know it.
The “task force” was a small fleet in and of it’s self, the long range sensors of Angela showed four destroyers, a frigate and a much larger vessel that must be the flagship and as those sensors confirmed mass and size readings the civilian captain practically crapped his vac suit and had to be “reminded” by an army trooper just how important this mission was before he continued on his course.
But finally the task force was in communication’s range, and Governor General Averato smiled to himself as the civilian captain switched on the ship to ship com net. A female face wearing a camouflage uniform with what Averato guessed to be a rank insignia on her collar, appeared on the screen …..a human Averato noted, and by her skin tone and features he guessed her ancestors came from Northern Europe, or North America back on old Earth, well at least they had a common ancestry to about half of Icara‘s population. He thought humorlessly as he noticed she seemed to be analyzing him just as closely.
“I am General Governor Michael Averato of the Icaran Royal Colony and Base of Goin, whom am I addressing?” His voice was as pleasant as he could manage as the face on the screen blinked her eyes numbly for a moment.
“She certainly is a young thing.” one of the civilian crewmen whispered as he caught a glimpse of the attractive young face on the screen…..she was certainly young looking but Averato waved his hand harshly at the man who had spoken….the Last thing they needed to do was offend someone before they even began talking to them.
“Sir, I am Lieutenant Liza Adare of the RANS Sunburst.” Her voice was pleasant but numb sounding as she seemed to be looking at her control board for a moment.
“Sir I have you at baring nine-oh-five mark two seven, please continue your approach vector until you reach this point.” A small light dot appeared on the sloops astrogation screen, then the young woman continued on in that same pleasant voice. “Then change your vector to two seven five by three, you will dock with Sunburst directly, please do not violate that heading or our destroyer screen may open fire.” her voice sounded like she was giving a genuine warning as she looked back at the screen and smiled politely.
“Thank you Lieutenant Adare, we will not violate your given course, I assure you.” Averato said in as cheerful a tone he could manage after being told he’d be blown out of the stars if he so much as violated his course.

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Thirteen minutes later the tiny 500 ton sloop Angela slipped quietly alongside the massive 400,000 ton light cruiser Sunburst and cut her power. Averato couldn’t help but notice that just one of the cruisers massive cannons was all it would take to easily destroy his puny sloop in a single shot, he shivered at the thought and forced himself to relax.
A docking tube extended from one of the mane blisters on the warship’s hull and linked with the sloop’s own docking tube, slowly the sloop was pulled in toward the massive ship’s airlock. A light clinking noise alerted the Icarans that they had attached to the warship’s hull and a rushing of air signaled the pressurization of the two docking tubes.
“Sir, please allow four of my men to go first, just in case they are planning something sneaky.” Sergeant Yu’s voice rang out as he slapped the butt of a magazine, securing it to his auto-rifle, a series of responsive slaps announced that the entire platoon had slapped their magazines into place.
“Alright Yu , four men that’s all, I don’t want these people to think we’re trying to board them.” Michael smiled and the young looking Sergeant grinned back as he went about selecting the four troopers he wanted to take point. A sloop boarding a ship this massive was utterly impossible and all of the military personnel present knew the Governor was making a tension breaking joke but the civilian crew went pale as the four troopers stepped into the tube.

Four army troopers stepped out of the airlock, their green fatigues and gray flak armor and helmets looked oddly out of place in the massive boat deck that stood before them, four columns of soldiers stood in parade formation, each representing a different field, the first column that the Icaran soldiers took note of was the one with a large group of men and women carrying rifles of some short slung over their right shoulder.
The other three columns wore different uniforms that the Icaran troopers did not recognize and carried no weapons. As the Governor stepped out of the airlock he too paused a moment, attempting to count how many men and women were in each of the four columns.

Behind Governor Averato the rest of his platoon fell into parade formation, though they were obviously far from relaxed as they watched their armed counterparts very closely from across the boat deck.
Three officers stepped forward from between the two centermost columns and walked proudly towards the Icaran Governor, two of the officers were tall men, one wore a white and tan uniform with red blocks on his chest that Averato assumed was a rank insignia, the other two officers wore the camouflage uniform that the Governor recognized from the young woman on the com screen, in fact he noticed with a wry smile that the officer to the Flag officer’s left was the same young woman who he had first spoken to.

“Governor Averato I presume.” The tall officer’s baritone voice was strong and confident as the officer offered his hand to the Icaran Governor.
“You presume correct….” Averato’s voice was questioning as he waited for this foreign officer to formally introduce himself.
“Ah….forgive me, I’m sure you do not recognize my rank insignia, I am Admiral Magill of the Rebel Alliance fifth squadron.” The Admiral released his firm handshake with a polite nod and turned to introduce his officers.

“This is Captain Parrin, commander of Starburst..” he waved to his right and the other officer offered his hand to Averato. “And this is Lieutenant Liza Adare, my chief communications officer….we have much to discuss Governor.” the Admiral continued in his same neutral baritone as he gestured for Averato to follow him, he also made sure to make a point of ignoring the platoon of Icaran soldiers standing in the bay.

As they walked down the corridor from the boat bay Averato and eight Icaran troopers looked around at the large open rooms and long corridors that these “Rebel Alliance” folks seemed to prefer, it was very different then the confined corridors and segmented compartments Icaran ship designers preferred and also a lot less safe as if any of those big open rooms took a hit the whole section would be harder to seal off, at least as far as Icaran tech went.

“So Admiral” Averato cleared his throat uncomfortably trying to think about all the repercussions his question might have…but as the Admiral paused and looked him square in the eyes Averato realized he’d already gone to far to clam up now. “Why exactly do you call yourselves the Rebel Alliance?” his voice stayed solid and confident but as the Rebel officers paused the Icaran commander wondered if he had asked to bluntly but then the Admiral’s face broke into a smile and Michael felt himself relax noticeably.
“Well Governor, our colony was established by the Northern Economic Block just before the fall of civilization back on Earth, and even though we found ourselves on a new world, light centuries away from Earth and their power base the NEB government stayed just as cruel and non-democratic as it had before, police actions and sanctions were commonplace until a group of men and women finally began to fight back.” The Admiral’s smile faded somewhat as he remembered some horror of the past. “Well so you see these brave men and women were outnumbered and outgunned almost one hundred to one but they fought for over a century they fought until finally they formed a Rebel Alliance that included many NEB army units, and finally they achieved victory….in their memory we have become a Democratic nation, and we have kept the name Rebel Alliance.” Admiral Magill frowned for a moment before continuing on down the corridor in silence.
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“So Governor, you speak for your uh what did you call him again?” Admiral Magill’s baritone sounded crisp as he looked over the treaty papers again reviewing the conditions laid down therein.
“Praetor, Admiral and yes I speak for the crown in this matter.” Governor Michael Averato smiled as he signed the piece of paper that was laid in front of him.
“So, our two star nations shall have a non-aggression pact with one another in so far as we will not colonize within your territory and you will do likewise and not colonize any of our worlds.” Magill said formally as he handed a copy of the treaty to his Icaran counterpart.
“Precisely….and perhaps someday a stronger alliance can come of this.” Averato’s left eyebrow raised when the Admiral frowned rather then replied.
“Governor, please understand that my nation is a democracy, so far as you’ve explained your system of government you are far from democratic, I’m afraid I doubt my people would want a closer relationship with a monarchy such as yours….please take no offense.” The RA Admiral sounded genuinely like he was trying not to offend his counterpart but it was also obvious that he hid some personal distrust of the Icaran form of government and so Averato chose not to push the subject further.
“Very well then Admiral, I must be taking my leave of you now to get these reports back to my own government.” With a nod Averato and Admiral Magill stood and shook each other’s hands.
Averato’s party was escorted back to the boat bay by Liza Adare, and as sweet as ever she bid them farewell. The old General couldn’t help but like the young woman, she had been his liaison to her Admiral for the past two days and had been a competent and sweet young woman considering she was dealing with complete strangers with an equally strange form of government in her eyes. With an inner nod Averato decided she reminded him a lot of his daughter back on Icara who had sent him a message only a month ago proudly announcing her enlistment into His Majesty’s Royal Navy, he bade her one Last farewell before boarding his sloop.
Two hours later the sloop Angela was heading to a rendezvous with the destroyer HMS Victory and her squadmate HMS Tiger who were patrolling the far end of the system hunting down a criminal syndicate that had been smuggling in various prohibited goods such as tobacco and stronger drugs.
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“I don’t know your highness but they just sent a message informing us that their population vetoed their treaty with us and that we can consider ourselves in a state of truce but not formal peace.” Governor Averato’s voice was grim as he stood before his Praetor on Icara after being summoned by a Crown courier ship (faster then any warship in the fleet do to it’s small size and large engine mounts) earlier that month when word of the treaty being broken reached Icara.
“Damned democracies never work! A mob can dictate who their entire world can talk to!” Praetor Leonidas fumed as he read the reports, the Rebels unilaterally withdrew for no other reason then their mob of a populace had decided that they did not want to be associated with a non-democratic government.
“Sir, I don’t believe they are going to move against us at this time, they’ve even pulled Admiral Magill’s fifth squadron out of Goin.” High Admiral Hallice said, his voice sounding more hopeful then either of his companions.
“Very well, Hallice keep Victory and Tiger on alert though, just in case those Rebels come back and decide they don’t want to be as peaceable.” leonidas said grumpily as he tossed the flexy with the rebel’s exact message aside.
“Michael’m afraid you’ll have to stay on Icara for a few months I have a lot to discuss with you.” Hallice said finally as he stood to leave, shaking Averato’s hand and Saluting Leonidas before withdrawing through the big oak doors.
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