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vfb said:
There's a random event with some spelling and grammar mistakes:
"People here are very unruly and have destroyed valuable equipment that is neccessary for us. Repairs costed 200 gold."
I'd suggest:
"People here are very unruly and have destroyed valuable and essential equipment. Repairs cost 200 gold."
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I would suggest
"People here have become very unruly and rioted. Valuable and essential equipment was destroyed. Repairs cost 200 gold."