AAR: The Recently Discovered Journals of the Legendary Desle

[Darkwind]

That was awesome. A great account of the life of a commander undoubtedly in the Hall of Fame. Will there be more? I hope so.

[Spritz]

If you have a minute, correct the typo right at the start, "our despicably enemies". It just bugged me, sorry.

Other than that, it was flipping awesome. The setting and potential atmosphere of Dominions is one of the reasons I like it so much, so it was fantastic to see it explored well in a piece of good writing like this.

[st.patrik]

I intended to post part 2 shortly after the initial post, but my computer died and took several weeks to repair. Now that I have it back I will be continuing the account, just in case anyone was wondering.