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Old June 15th, 2003, 03:58 PM

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It's been so long since I've had time to read all the stories floating around, I'm gonna have to go back and read them all from the beginning.
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hey dumbluck that should be a not a ... if I had time I'd love to sit and read all the fanfic on this forum back to back, even the stuff I've already read.
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uh oh: check out "hero" rule number 68- Cane could be in trouble.

I'm pleased to say I've managed to avoid most of these plot pitfalls so far...
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*Taps mic experimentally. Blows dust off it.

Uhh.. hello? Anyone still out here, or did you all wander off? Well, if there is anyone left, I've just finished a new chapter. I've finally managed to leap some of the plot-hurdles that were holding me back, and I think things will soon be good once more.

This chapter is a bit of a recap, summarising some of the plot points from earlier chapters. It also sets us up for what is to come. If anyone notices any glaring holes in the plot, please let me know, I've been inside it for far too long to look at it objectively.

Anyway, enough BS, here it is:

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Othaglot and Cane, Chapter 23. For previous chapters, click here.
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The “Bocca al Lupo” lowered itself gracefully into orbit, and from my viewport I saw the distant outline of the Worthwhile Endeavour, no doubt preparing to leave by now. It wouldn't have done my credibility as a fugitive much good to arrive on a naval starship, and so I had been given a feasible cover story and transferred to a civilian craft about week from Plenty. She was registered locally, and I couldn’t be sure whether the crew’s boisterousness was normal behaviour for Plentians or whether they were simply glad to be home.

I was interrupted by a knock on the door. It was Enyemin Cane.
“Mr Othaglot, good to see you in the flesh at Last.” He said, in that jovial way of his.
“Quite astonishing that, ah, incident on the way over. Dashed sorry to have put you through all that, but I suppose now your killer is out of the picture, so to speak.”
I had my own doubts about this, as I had discussed with Commander Lock. I made a non-commital sound.
“Anyway, the intelligence people asked me to brief you. No doubt they’re afraid to send one of their own people in case you read their minds and find out all their dirty little secrets.” He laughed heartily, but we both knew there was probably truth in his remark.
I shook the senior Cane’s hand, and took a moment to look at him more closely. Like his nephew he was a little shorter than the Earth-born humans I had met, probably as a result of Plenty’s above-average gravity. Like Captain Frasier he seemed to be somewhat rounder than the norm, but unlike the unfortunate captain he dressed almost to accentuate the shape, thus increasing his already considerable presence. He spoke loudly and, if the accent assigned to him by my translator was a reflection of his true voice, with a hint of privilege. As he came closer to me and took a seat, I noticed that his skin was indeed blue- I had dismissed this as data corruption when I had seen it in his Messages. I was sure that this wasn’t a natural colour for humans so asked him about it, eager to find conversation and with it an opportunity to study his mind.
“Oh, the skin. Well, call it a disguise. That nephew of mine tells me it’s terribly out of fashion, and that I should use my natural coloration like the youngsters do, but what he fails to realise is that I have an image to maintain. Now by homeworlder standards I’m as shocking and unruly as anyone else on this planet, but most of the locals regard me as something of a conservative- Last of the Old Colonials, they call me. To them I’m just a harmless, blustery old stuffed shirt with his foolish head full of cobwebs and overpriced brandy... oh, this probably isn’t making much sense to you, dear boy, but just take my word for it when I say that sometimes it pays to be underestimated.”
“Not in my line of work.” I replied. “In my job I have to give the impression that I’m twelve times smarter, quicker and tougher than I really am.”
His smile gave way to laughter, before turning into an altogether more serious mood. “Well then, my boy, I’m glad I’m not a detective. I certainly don’t envy you the task before you now.”
“I have extensive undercover experience, and I’ve studied the Viking culture in depth. I’ll be fine.” I asserted, noting with grim irony that I sounded twelve times less scared than I really was.
“Well, I may have some new information to help you along. Most of what we know was included in the report I sent to you in Outlier, but we’ll go over it anyway, just for the sake of being thorough.”
I appreciated this scrupulousness. I was beginning to suspect that the man beneath the façade was someone I could really work with. He opened a small case and extracted an array of papers.
“We have identified your headless Viking.” he began “I have his details here, but to tell the truth they are of little interest. The important thing is that he was a trusted member of the Jormungund clan, recruited four years ago by this fellow.”
Cane showed me an image of a thin human with a large mass of hair on the lower half of his face.
“His Viking name is Tor Hammer, but he was born Jemmt Andrel Viscount. Middle class, well educated, various radical political affiliations in his teens and early adulthood. He came into a little money at a relatively young age and built himself up a small business empire- legitimately, as far as we can tell. Then, despite his success, he cashed most of it in and joined the Jormungund back on Earth, around 10 years ago. Back then it was just another gang of drinkers and brawlers- rather odd company for our entrepreneur- but he soon made his way to the top of the pile. Information is sketchy about this period because the intelligence agencies pretty much ignored the whole viking phenomenon until Mr. Hammer started making his presence felt.

He first caught intel’s attention four years ago, when they noticed that his name was turning up repeatedly in conversation with various ambassadorial types. I’ve met him myself on at least two occasions. It seems he had been using his old business connections to cultivate contacts and even recruit in political and diplomatic circles. A year after that he handed control of his clan over to his second-in-command and came out here to found the Plenty chapter. He’s been holding meetings with various alien parties for some time now, and we’re fairly sure he’s used the Jormungund to do ‘favours’ for the Sallegan and Sergetti. Nothing necessarily illegal, but all very secretive: Information gathering, couriering and so on. There are suggestions that he may even have contacted the Piundon.”
“What do you think he’s hoping to achieve?” I asked. “If money was his only motivation it would have paid him more to stay with his business pursuits.”
“That’s the big puzzle, and we’re hoping that you will be able to answer it for us. This latest stunt- the so-called ‘petty theft’ from the military research lab- is a definite step up in the scale of the Jormungund’s activities. We’re hoping it will give us- give you- the opportunity to uncover their agenda.”
“So you’re sure that the theft was perpetrated by the clan?”
“No. We are sure of the thief’s identity, but we’ve no solid proof that he was a Viking. We are sure that he was a known associate of Olric, your headless man. We believe they hadn’t seen one-another for a few years, and then suddenly they were spotted together several times in the weeks running up to the break-in. Both of them disappeared from view immediately afterwards. Those facts, combined with our belief that the Jormungund have been doing these ‘favours’ are enough to make us suspect that he stole the data on their behalf.”
In my opinion there were far too many uncertainties underpinning this case, but that’s the difference between police work and intelligence work. Spies don’t have to prove their assertions before a court. They are accountable only to their own superiors. I pressed for more information.
“What sort of data was stolen?”
“It was the design for some kind of new armour, apparently. Supposed to protect warships more effectively from weapons damage, give them an advantage in combat. We assume they were stolen on some foreign government’s behalf- the Sallegans, probably, they’re always trying to keep up with us- but it’s possible they have something else in mind.”
“Something else?” I was alarmed. “You think the Vikings are planning to use the information themselves? Build warships with it?” The idea of a fully armed warship crewed by a crowd of rowdy, helmet clad drunkards like Loorl filled me with a kind of dread I had never before experienced.
“We can’t afford to rule it out. The Viking organisation has quite a bit of funding behind it, thanks largely to Mr Hammer, and to tell you the truth the only thing we’ve managed to predict with any certainty so far is that we never know what they’ll do next. In short, we wouldn’t put anything past them.”
This was an extremely unsettling notion. How could I ever hope to survive in such a chaotic culture? Cane sensed my discomfort and changed the subject.
“Anyway. As I say, the thief and his associate both disappeared after taking the plans, we assume they were in hiding together. We knew about his connection to the Viking fellow so we started watching the clan immediately, and that way we’re almost certain that neither of them had a chance to pass the stolen data to the rest of the Jormungund. However, we’ve since been able to work out Olric’s movements and he left Earth just two days after the theft, 12 hours before his friend was slashed to death. The plans weren’t found on the body.”
He made a significant face at me, no doubt checking to see that the importance of this statement had sunk in. It had.
“So Olric could have had the data, in which case it may have been taken to Outlier and then stolen by the Gla when he was beheaded.”
“Yes.”
“Alternatively, it’s possible that the thief held on to the plans. If his killer really was my suspect, then she could have taken the data. From Earth she must have gone directly to the Cue Cappan homeworld, and from there to Outlier.”
“That is another possibility.”
“Or, one of them handed the data over to some unknown party in the two days after the theft.”
“Perhaps.”
“Finally, Olric or the murderess could have passed it on, hidden it or lost it anywhere on their travels between Earth, Outlier and my homeworld.”
“Also true.” The human said, solemnly. “That’s why we’ve brought you in. We have people searching every rock between here, your homeworld and ours, but as you can imagine their chances aren’t good. For now our best chance of finding out where the designs are is by infiltrating the Viking organisation. That is your primary objective. Your secondary objective is to find out why they took them in the first place. If it was under contract from a foreign government, we want to know which one. If not, well then we definitely want to know what they’re up to.”
“What about the Cue Cappan secret service? Have they been able to give you anything?”
“Only you. They say they’re investigating their own Viking clans and the movements of your suspect between Earth and Outlier, but to be honest they don’t seem very hopeful.”
I looked into his mind, and I was fairly sure that he wasn’t holding anything back. He himself had obviously been briefed on a need-to-know basis, since it would be very hard for him to keep secrets from me. Unaware of my psychic scrutiny, he paused and pulled his face into an expression I didn’t understand. It was my turn to speak, but I didn’t know what to say. Eventually, I asked the only question I could think of.
“Where do I start?”
“We’ve identified a likely starting point for you. It’s a bar in Primavera called the Bifrost Lodge. It’s a popular spot for Vikings from the Loki clan. The man you’ll need to speak to is one of them. As well as being a part of the cult, he’s known to deal in stolen goods, and he has contacts with the Jormungund, who are all keeping their heads down following the theft. Your man’s name is Erik the Shed. Make yourself known to him, and we hope they’ll make themselves known to you.”
I bobbed my eyestalks in agreement. “And what about my identity?”
“We’ve gathered together the information we have the woman you were tracking, and to be honest there isn’t much. We know that she travelled under this false identity to get to Outlier,” he handed me some convincing Cue Cappan documents in the name of Gleesl, “and that she used the name ‘Sloo’ aboard the Marilyn. That might be her real name.”
“If it is, it’s only part of it.” I explained. “She was joined, so her full name would be longer than just “Sloo.”
“I see.” Said Cane. “Well, following up your own investigations, your homeworld colleagues have been able to inform us that she was a member of the Hreidmar clan there. Also, it’s possible that news of her escape from Outlier and the subsequent destruction of the Marilyn will have made its way here. The Lupo was in Gamallon at the same time as you, so if anyone asks, you can claim that you wanted to make your trail as complicated as possible and took a shuttle across to the Lupo shortly after leaving Outlier. We’ve already made the necessary changes to the records, in case anyone tries to confirm it, but if they should speak to a member of the crew you could be in trouble. For that reason I recommend you stay here another 24 hours and go down to the surface tomorrow. The Lupo will be leaving orbit shortly afterwards, making it a little harder to disprove your story.”
I was comforted that they were at least trying to cover every possible angle for me.
Cane reached into his case once more, and produced a few items for me.
“Here’s a Viking helmet. You may want to wear it in to get those distinctive sore patches on your eye stalks.” They really had covered everything. “Here’s an emblem for your clan- I believe you should wear it on the helmet, seeing as you don’t have any other garments. We’ve also procured for you a cheap, market- bought translator. It’s not as sophisticated as the one you currently carry, I’m afraid, but your Frontier Order issue equipment is something of a giveaway.” He smiled, but I could tell the smile was hiding something else. I reached into his mind and touched upon was a sense of finality there, as though he were arming a soldier for a battle from which he knew there could be no return.
“There are various other items in this bag. There’s no weapon, you’ll have to get through customs fair and square, but we can direct you to a place where you can buy one. Illegally, I’m afraid, but we’ve made arrangements to ensure the local police don’t catch you at it. There’s some information about your clan in this data pack, you’ll have more than enough time to familiarise yourself with it tonight. I can keep your own belongings safe for you if you like, or I can have them forwarded to your office.”
I chose the former option and handed over my carry-pouch: It contained my only possessions for 50 light years and my entire identity. Cane stood up, gesturing with the hand that held the pouch.
“When this is all over, come and find me at the foreign office to pick this up. I’ll have a large brandy and a cigar waiting for you.”
I mumbled a thankyou and bobbed my eyes.
“Is there anything else you need?”
I could think of nothing.
“Then I’ll bid you farewell, Mr Othaglot. Farewell and good luck.”
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Well, I'm glad you haven't completely forgotten us. But this feels a bit rushed. Couldn't we have been in on the actual move to the other ship to prepare his background cover? And was there any mention of the other 'victim' in any previous chapter? But suddenly there he is in Cane's background story.

Also, a theft of a new military technology is hardly a 'petty' theft!
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Well, I'm glad you haven't completely forgotten us. But this feels a bit rushed.
I can believe that, it's kind of a first draft for this chapter=-) I'll probably re-read and refine it in a chapter or two.

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Couldn't we have been in on the actual move to the other ship to prepare his background cover?
Well, I only thought of it after finishing the Last chapter, and to be honest there;s nothing too interesting about it.

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And was there any mention of the other 'victim' in any previous chapter?
But suddenly there he is in Cane's background story.
Yes, there was. *rummages through notes* ... Extract from Chapter 14:

It seems the human homeworld police were looking for a known associate of our Olric following an incidence of “petty theft” some 30 or 40 weeks ago. Mr Cane Senior was not convinced. “Between you and me, the intelligence agencies were involved and it sounds like they were turning the entire bloody galaxy upside- down for him. He showed up dead in an alley a week later with very strange wounds

and Chapter 16:

You remember I mentioned a “petty theft” connected to an associate of your victim? Well, the associate was another of these Viking types, and the theft was from a military research lab. I said it didn’t look too petty, didn’t I? Ha!


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See above.
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And another one. As you know I'm no expert on weaponry, so if anyone finds anything in the gun-dealer's scene that needs attention, please let me know.

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Othaglot & Cane, Chapter 24.
Chapters 1-22 here, chapter 23 a few Posts down.
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A day later I was in a shuttle, blazing down deep into the atmosphere, Plenty's fierce sky and all-encompassing ocean painting a sheer canvas of blue before me. The pilot- a talkative human named Chell with rope-like hair and intricate tattoos - had plunged from orbit and levelled out at a point several thousand kilometres from the space port, so we would be another few hours in flight before landing. It's not a particularly efficient way of getting from place to place, but I've noticed that Cue Cappan pilots often do the same thing when they've been off-planet for a long spell- Maybe it's just a way of prolonging their brief respite from space, or perhaps they need time to readjust to the idea of nothing but atmosphere above their heads before venturing out into the open. Either way, I welcomed the chance to see something of this planet before facing the mission ahead.

As we cruised at just a few kilometres' altitude, I watched Plenty's single ocean roll serenely along beneath us, stretching away to the horizon, largely uninterrupted for sixty thousand kilometres in all directions. Every few minutes we would pass over one of the clusters of flat, roundish little islands that make this planet's only claims to dryness, the unvaried dull yellow of the native plant life looking appropriately humble against the shining cobalt of the sea.

It was half an hour before we encountered anything more interesting. Chell pointed out a number of light patches in the water, each one perfectly circular and attended by a smattering of ships and floating platforms.
"Underwater mining." The pilot shouted over her shoulder. The shuttle’s engine wasn’t particularly loud, but she needed to shout because the music blaring from somewhere- which could have easily passed for unshielded engine noise- drowned her out. "Plenty's huge, but more than nine-tenths of the surface is ocean so obviously most of the good stuff’s on the sea bed."
"What about the Sergetti population?" I yelled, removing the viking helmet and tenderly testing the irritated skin it revealed. "I thought their government had rights to the ocean."
"No, just some of it, and technically they're only renting that. They have a few little cities out in the depths somewhere, although obviously they don’t get too many visits from air-breathers like us. They aren't the most welcoming people anyway, if you get my meaning.”
"How can you trust them?" I asked. "After the war, I mean."
"That was a long time ago. I mean they don't particularly like aliens but they have kind of gotten used to us. Anyway, I'm sure the secret services keep an eye on their comings and goings, they must have their methods."
I felt a rush of cold at this Last statement. Obviously, going undercover in any circumstances inspires a certain degree of healthy paranoia, but in this case I was running on overdrive.

Soon we started to see inhabited islands, all or partly colonised by introduced plants that offered countless shades of green in neatly farmed shapes. Few of them held more than one small settlement, and where they did winding, narrow roads reached out to connect the little pockets of civilisation. It was strange to see such development inland when the beaches were so clear, but I suppose it would be just as strange for a human to see an island virtually untouched in the middle, and yet completely encircled by the busy canals and buildings we construct in the coastal shallows.

According to Chell there were nearly three hundred thousand of these tiny landmasses on Plenty, each one on average 20km wide. I did some quick multiplication and estimated around 18 million km of coastline on this planet- probably more. This would have made a perfect home for my own people, had we been the ones lucky enough to find it first. Little wonder the Sergetti were prepared to go to war for it.

"It’s not normal land, though.” She shouted suddenly. “There's hardly any real land on Plenty at all. You get the odd volcanic crater but all these islands you see here are made by a type of plant. Do you get anything like coral where you come from?"
We don't, and I suddenly missed my own translator which probably could have provided a brief explanation from its cultural database. Much to my relief Chell actually turned down her music in order to converse at a more conversational level.
"Well, it's a bit like that. This plant builds up a kind of mineral residue, you see. It grows slowly from the seabed in a con until it gets to the surface, then the exposed bit dies off and another layer grows around it, dies off and so on. That’s why they’re all so round and flat, and why the terrain has that ring pattern. The largest island on the entire planet is eighty Ks across, and they say it's more than 200 million years old."

This education continued for over an hour, interrupted only occasionally when my tutor would turn the music up temporarily to fully appreciate what she described as a "good bit". Ever eager to increase my knowledge about the environment I would be working in, I listened carefully as she moved away from geology to provide a brief description of the local customs and quirks, a quick who’s who of prominent local personages and a rundown on some of the more conspicuous sub-cultures and ethnic Groups I could expect to encounter. She talked animatedly about the Viking cult and some friends of hers in the Idunna clan, and then went on to provide lengthy descriptions of all the best bars, hotels and markets in our destination city. Finally, she gave me details of how to get free drinks in certain Sergetti eating establishments, how to con your way into the best seats at Mossy Molasses' DrukZuzz-Jazz Joint and not only how to recognise Salzalum street-muggers, but how to convince them you're part of their gang and claim a share of the night’s takings. Although I found her conversation exhausting and her ethics questionable, I felt sure that if they ever met, she and Cane would get on well.

She stopped talking once we found ourselves approaching Primavera, Plenty's largest archipelago and primary city. We absorbed the sight of it together in silence. The air here was thick with traffic, mainly in the form of orbital shuttles like our own, queuing for landing spots on the massive floating platform that appeared to bear the city’s spaceport. Furthermore, hundreds of vessels could be seen ploughing V shapes into the waters around the main sea port, which was an artificial extension to the most eastern island. Six or seven more islands of equivalent size and a dozen or so smaller ones huddled close behind, all haphazardly tied together by a jumble of artificial causeways and wide bridges. Low-altitude airships distributed goods to rooftops while a swarm of faster planetary aircraft buzzed to and fro, skimming to a halt on the water or parking delicately on or in the high-rise architecture. Almost every scrap of available space was piled high with towers, domes and blocks in conflicting colours, most of them clearly having been designed and erected without any particular consideration for whatever lay right next to it. Hazy geometry beneath the waves indicated that a lack of dry land was no obstacle to urban growth, and I realised that I must be looking at Primavera’s Sergetti quarter. Several pressurised transit-tubes ran from the islands into the sea towards this district, providing an interface between the air and water breathing populations.

Altogether, the effect was overwhelming. The myriad construction styles and materials battling for attention were representative of a thousand cultures and eras from a hundred planets and a dozen sentient races. It was as though all of known space had been compressed into this tiny arena, where only the loudest, the pushiest and most assertive would stand a chance of ever getting noticed. Thanks to my career in Frontier Order I had travelled extensively through Commonwealth space and I used to think I’d seen. This though, this was vast and unknown and for a moment I was humbled. I felt like some rural homeworld Orro who'd lived an entire life in a remote swamp village, then suddenly thrust unprepared into the thriving, cosmopolitan distraction of the Capital.

Which wasn’t that far from the truth.

The feeling of awe soon faded into the background, and I came to the conclusion that although I was impressed by Primavera, I didn’t like it. Although undoubtedly a hugely different scale, in many respects it was just like the scrappy trading outPosts and frontier spaceports I had spent my entire career policing. Driven by commerce and industry at a rate the authorities and planners could never hope to keep up with, it had become a brash, undisciplined, anarchic junkpile of a place. I could almost sense lawlessness rising off this city like a bad smell.

And in that moment it hit me: I hate places like this. Why had I spent my entire life working in them? How had I failed for so long to realise that I am so ill-suited to my lifestyle? Now here I was, after a career dedicated to risking my life to protect cramped, tiny, noisy little colonial cesspits from themselves, I had finally been promoted. Now I would be risking my life to protect a huge, sprawling, alien, urban-colonial cesspit. Preoccupied by these questions and Chell’s abrasive music, there were dark clouds in my mind as we touched down on Plenty.

We touched down and I thanked Chell. She offered to guide me through the spaceport and into the city, but I knew I should tackle this alone. I stepped out into tropical humidity and then almost immediately into the dry, air-conditioned arrivals building. There was a lot of unnecessary waiting around before my paperwork was half-heartedly inspected. I was waved through customs without a second look and then I was out in to the spaceport’s main concourse, where alien life of every variety thronged and hollered. Pale, dour Sallegans marched imperiously ahead of their squabbling attendant Salzalum. A lumpy Drukshockan in a methane-pressurised cart argued vehemently with something whose species I couldn’t even identify over the price of something or other, while every flavour and colour of humanity pervaded throughout.

The spaceport’s signs were in a variety of Languages, none of them Cue Cappan. I asked a human- a sweating homeworlder in crisp, formal attire- for help and was directed to an information desk, where one of the locals sat in a state of comparative undress. She charged my translator with maps of the spaceport and city, smiled and pointed and I soon found myself in a taxi boat, shielded from the heat by a simple canvas canopy. I trailed two tentacles in the water, closed my eyes and tried to convince myself I was on my own homeworld. It didn’t work.

I had the taxi drop me off on Dogma Beach, according to the senior Cane’s instructions. It was mid-morning and the beach was bustling with activity. Some people running or swimming for exercise, others happy to simply lie on the hot sand and bask. A thin road ran parallel to the water, with number of broad, tree-lined avenues running away at right angles. Cane had left me a list of directions to follow, each junction described by a landmark. A metallic statue on one of the busier avenues sent me half a kilometre inland, until I spotted the glitzy restaurant with the columns of fish-filled water held up by nothing more than energy fields. I turned left and immediately right, hearing the temple of Elvis long before I saw it. Taking the second left after that, I found myself on a narrow lane that curved gently inland, terminating at a heavily vandalised park full of native trees. To the right of the park was a tower block, which the map assured me was a classic example of the Asian neo-deco architecture that had been popular with Plenty’s first colonists. It looked to me like a dilapidated, crumbling, twelve-story heap of trouble.

On the third floor I found apartment 332 and removed my helmet, using it to knock on the door. I waited two minutes without a reply and knocked again. Eventually a face appeared in a small screen to one side of the door. “Whayya want?”
As per Cane’s instructions, I said ‘Suggsy’ had sent me. There was a pause, and the door opened. A naked human opened the door and looked me up and down. “What the f#ck are you?” He had clearly just woken up and was doing a very bad job of hiding a gun behind his back.
“I’m here on business.” I said, raising myself onto tentacle-tips to make eye-contact at his own level. “Suggsy sent me.”
“You said that.” He remarked, rubbing his eyes. “Come in.” He stepped back slightly, allowing me just enough room to squeeze timidly past him. Instead I pushed through forcefully, nudging him backwards to give myself space.
He closed the door and stopped trying to hide the gun. He only took his eyes off me long enough to find a pair of shorts on a table, sniff them and pull them on. “I’ll call Suggsy, and I’ll be right with you.”
I hadn’t anticipated this. I assumed that the mention of this ‘Suggsy’ character would be enough to get this man’s trust. With one eyeball I looked around for an escape, keeping the other fixed on the man.
“Suggsy mate… yeah I know it’s early, but you should tell your friends to come round after I get up, shouldn’t you? Yeah… I dunno… Purple. Tentacles… Hey you, what’s your name?”
I debated with myself for a moment. Should I use the name on my papers? I decided against it. “Sloo.” I said.
The weapons dealer repeated this name to his friend while scratching his backside with the muzzle of his weapon.
“Yeah, that’s what I thought.” He ended the call, and I tried to appear outwardly calm while simultaneously tensing for action.
“You want a drink?” Obviously my new friends in intelligence had predicted the call and somehow persuaded Suggsy to back me up. After fishing a drinking straw out of my bag, I accepted a small glass of something brown that tasted nothing at all like wine. Then we got down to business.

“So you’ll be looking for something Cue Cappan, I suppose. You’d probably have trouble handling weapons designed for anyone else.” He said, apparently able to recognise my species now that he’d woken up a little. He disappeared into another room and returned with a small arsenal in an open case.
“You have to understand I don’t keep a lot of cappan stuff in, but what I do got is top quality.”
He unwrapped the first gun and handed it to me.
“How about this? Groosh WavebLaster mark III, standard issue to Commonwealth police force and Frontier Order. Pulsed energy bLast, no recoil, high repeat rate. This is a very accurate weapon, mate, and reliable too- as long as you clean it every other day.”
I cleaned my own Groosh daily. I pulled the offered weapon apart with all the expertise of a lifetime’s familiarity and examined the parts. It was a copy, but not a bad one. I snapped it back together and balanced its weight on my tentacle. It felt good. However I hadn’t just relinquished my own gun to pick up another one like it. I asked what else he had. He tilted his head and made a clicking noise as he packed the WavebLaster away.
“You won’t get better than the Groosh, my friend, especially not ‘round here. No offence mate, but most Cappan weapons are pretty poor in my opinion. Too much maintenance, not enough damage. Here, try this.”
He handed me a Shlaalgrah 900, the choice of the discerning Gla boss and undoubtedly the best option after the Groosh. This guy knew his business well. “Less punch than the Groosh.” He said, “But more discrete and it holds a longer charge. Waterproof, obviously and again, good accuracy in the proper hands.” He looked at my tentacles. “Or whatever.”

We looked at a few more weapons, haggled over the price and drank another bourbon. I left the apartment block with the Shlaalgrah 900 and a half-dozen fighting blades, feeling far more confident than I had done all day. I consulted my map, asking it for the Bifrost Lodge. It was 20 minutes’ walk away. I steeled myself. It was time to get to work.
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