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Old August 13th, 2002, 06:09 PM
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Ok, any future Posts in this thread not directly related to the story will be deleted without warning. I am not going to lock this one down. I like it too much.
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Hey congradulations Sachmo on breaking a 100 Posts.
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DOH! Didn't even notice...but thanks. Also, thanks for the kind words, guys. All that matters to me is that people are enjoying the story.
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Love the story Sachmo, just worried about when you take a leaf out of Barbara Cartland's book and introduce the 'love interest'!!!!!!
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I think she's more in love with her career, but you never know...
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Default Re: Rise of the Remorhaz Society

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Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level = 6.9
Flesch Reading Ease = 68.4

huh?
A numerical measure of how easy a piece is to read, see for example Readability Testing {link}

F-K says your story would be understood by someone who reads at the 7th-grade level in the US school system (12-13 years old, generally).
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"F-K says your story would be understood by someone who reads at the 7th-grade level in the US school system (12-13 years old, generally)."

Oh come on, be honest. 25 and up. No joke. I am being serious. Most Americans can not read at a level beyond the 7th grade. I write reports and such nearly every day. They are all at the 12h grade level and most of our engineers ask for a "simplified" report.

So your work is right on target. Very well written and I love reading it.

Feel free to delete this post when needed.

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