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Old December 3rd, 2004, 06:32 PM
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Well here's a small (micro-chapter):

2419.2 In honor of a Fallen Hero
The Bureau of ship designs had just unveiled it’s newest creation, a super dreadnought, more powerful and better defended then their smaller cousins the super dreadnoughts would form a main battle line that’s power would be unmatched by any other star nation known to the Icaran.
In honor of the first serious casualties the military sustained these new ships were designated the Admiral Yu Hing Pe class super dreadnought, named for the admiral who with several thousand other members of the third fleet lost their lives in the third battle of Fornax.
Several ships were put into construction quickly across several systems to reinforce the main battle fleets.
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Your story makes for a Great read!
Now when I use the Merge Fleet screen to merge my first brand new Dreadnought into my Grand Fleet and then assign it as the Fleet leader I will think of My Proud Captain getting their new command.
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2419.3 The Newest Sword:
HMS Shadowclaw’s advanced sensors had detected the four Phong warships at a much greater range then the other vessels of the third fleet, Ross was eager to get his newest ship into the fight so he ordered the 3rd fleet excluding his own flagship to remain in position in blockading the warp point.
Along with being the most heavily armed and most advanced starship in the fleet, Shadowclaw was also the fastest ship, she could intercept and destroy the enemy ships and return to the fleet in under a month which is something no other ship could do, this also played part in Ross decision to go out with his flagship and no escorts.

Two days after her departure from the 3rd fleet the massive dreadnought was already closing the range with all four enemy ships.
“One can’t help but admire their bravery.” Captain Fowler commented sourly as she watched the four tiny specs of light closing on the much larger green light code that represented the Icaran dreadnought.
“Really, is it bravery Captain or arrogance?” Ross sneered at the four closing dots before turning to the young woman, his expression held a wisp of a smile. “Those four ships don’t stand a chance against us, the Phong started this war with superior technology to our own and thought they could conquer us!, and because of our conquest of the Rebel Alliance, as well as our superior scientific endeavors we now have the upper hand, they know they can’t win yet they do not surrender. This is more an act of arrogant defiance then of bravery, some people simply need to learn when they’ve been conquered.”
“I suppose it’s a little bit of both sir.” Fowler’s voice held far less sympathy for her enemies then it had only moments before. Ross was right, the Phong started the war when they destroyed Haden, they threatened the survival of Icara and on more then one occasion demanded the Royal navy surrender, but Icara had fought on and now she was prevailing, sympathy towards an enemy was for the weak, the child and the coward Fowler scolded herself for her lapse and then turned her attention back to the tactical display.

“Admiral enemy ships are entering maximum combat range, shall I order gunnery crews to fire?” The chief weapons officer looked at the Captain instead of Ross which the Admiral actually preferred, he liked his crews to feel comfortable with their direct superiors and not feel like they need to pass everything through him.

“No hold your fire until we enter optimal range, we’ll still be out of their firing envelope at that point, and I don’t want to overstress our guns until we’ve had a chance to test them out in battle.” Fowler barely bothered looking away from her OpRan (Optimal Range) countdown to reply to her officer.
Seconds later the countdown blinked blue, Fowler shot a quick glance toward Ross, the Admiral nodded curtly.
“Weapons, Open fire all batteries all targets, take them down.” Fowler flipped up the visual display on her chair while Ross watched the main screens.
“Aye, firing all batteries, all targets.”
Moments later the screens lit up brilliantly as dozens of green beams shot forth from the massive Icaran dreadnought’ the broadside slammed into the four Phong warships like lightning through tissue paper. The infinite dark of space momentarily became alive with light and fire, and then….darkness returned, leaving only wreckage where once there had been four cruisers.
“My lord! Tactical do we have any signs of the enemy?” Fowler along with everyone else on the bridge crew was stunned silent, even they had never suspected the true power their ship had until this moment.
“No ma’am, they’re all gone, I’m only reading small clouds of debris and atomized hull and biological elements.” the tactical officer’s reply turned heads throughout the bridge as the realization sank in.
“Congratulations ladies and gentlemen we’ve just knocked four enemy starships out of the universe, let’s head back to the rest of the fleet.” Ross said cheerfully before standing up and walking towards the command center’s door. Inside the victory felt almost hollow, the enemy never even stood a chance to fire one defiant shot, it felt more like target practice then battle to the war hardened Admiral. But more dangerous targets lay out there in the universe and these new weapons brought Icara one step closer to dominance and in the end that is all that mattered.
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2419.5 Battle and Growth:
“How many ships did you say Commander?” Captain Fowler jumped out of her bed and wiped the sleep from her eyes as she waited for the Officer of the Watch to confirm his message.
“21 Ma’am, various classes of Phong Light Cruiser, they are headed towards us at maximum speed.” Commander Hoggins was surprisingly relaxed about the situation, but then again the IRN had proven that they completely outclass the Phong Federal Navy in every battle since 2407 so there was not much to be that tense about.

Ross had ordered only the Hawkwing and Lenin to escort his flagship against the enemy fleet, with their new weapons and upgrades Ross was convinced that 21 enemy ships would be no problem for his small squadron.
The massive dreadnought kept her speed down so that her two heavy cruiser consorts could keep up during the 18 hour trip to intercept the enemy fleet, in the meantime Ross allowed his crew to eat breakfast, get some sleep and have some off time as he wanted them to be in top trim when the battle actually began.

“Admiral, Captain Yu is hailing.” The com officer tabbed a control that sent the image of Captain Yu directly to Ross’ command chair and engaged privacy mode throughout the rest of the bridge.
“Admiral, I would like to request you allow Lenin to take the lead in the opening line if you wouldn’t mind sir?” Yu’s tone was very formal and rigid, it rather surprised Ross after hearing her laughing at a dirty joke in the officer’s mess aboard his ship only a few days before, then again at that time it surprised him and all the other officers present that the “prim and proper Miss Yu” would laugh a at joke about Phong reproduction, Ross shook his head as he thought about the fact that she was still so capable of surprising him.
“Oh, why do you want to lead the charge Captain?” Ross asked plainly
“Admiral, with all respect your flagship is hardly the appropriate choice to lead the line of battle straight into an enemy line, until we can come line-to-line with them I recommend you allow a smaller ship lead the advance.” Her reasoning was logical but Ross did not like the thought of risking her ship to protect his, no matter how well the odds favored his squadron, he was tempted to order Hawkwing to take up the lead but forced that thought out of his mind, if he did something like that and Hawkwing were damaged or destroyed then he would never forgive himself for sacrificing one good officer to protect another just because he had feelings for her.
“Captain Yu…” Ross swallowed hard and steeled his resolve “Permission granted, you may take your ship to the lead but when we form the line-to-line engagement I want you ship in it’s proper position understood?”
“Aye Admiral understood, thank you sir.” Yu saluted and cut the circuit.
Ross steepled his fingers under his chin and watched the tactical display show the heavy cruiser pulling forward.

20 minutes later the fleet was in engagement range, the opening salvo was fired by Lenin her powerful cannons easily destroyed two enemy warships as she turned about to begin forming the -line of battle-, Shadowclaw was the second warship to fire, her guns vaporized three enemy ships, she took up formation just “behind” the Lenin in the line and was followed up by Hawkwing who had managed two kills.

“Sir Line of battle formed.”
“Enemy fleet closing fast, all gunnery crews report ready for broadside”
“Enemy entering their combat envelope in three minutes I repeat three minutes, that leaves us three more broadsides.”
Voices echoed across the bridge of the massive as the crew quickly readied themselves for the real battle, Ross watched the main screen light up in a dazzling array of colors as all three Icaran warships fired their broadsides almost simultaneously into the enemy fleet, 10 ships vanished in an eye blink.
Four enemy ships remained yet they closed far faster then first estimated, all three fired directly at Lenin breaching her shields, the cannon shells that made it through the shields fell harmlessly against the Icaran warship’s ablative armor and both Ross and Yu thanked God for that particular invention.

Shadowclaw swept down upon the four offenders as if the ship it’s self were filled with wroth, her guns protruding from her like teeth ready to shred meat from bones, and shred they did as the massive dreadnought swept through the four ship formation, guns blazing as their beams were switched to “slicing mode”, the powerful green beams swept across the four enemy ships tearing them to pieces with ease, it was like a wolf among sheep and the dreadnought rampaged until all four enemy ships were nothing but debris clouds and particulate matter.

The Icaran fleet had emerged victorious, only two crew were killed aboard Lenin but in their triumph Ross felt only doubt, doubt about his feelings towards Yu Lin and how they would effect his future as the commander of a Royal Navy fleet.

Meanwhile the Icaran Praetor, Leonidas speaks to the public:
“My fellow Icarans, today is a grand day in our history, a day we achieve what has been for centuries thought impossible, the ability to terraform entire worlds!
On this day our construction companies all across the empire have begun building the first series of atmospheric converters, these converters allow us to turn any atmosphere on any world into one that our people can breath, this development will allow our once domed, and population controlled colonies to expand over the surface of an entire planet.

Now this project will not take place overnight, in fact the first series alone will take approximately three years to be fully realized, yet these first slow steps are not without purpose our scientists are still unsure of how the planet’s will react when their atmospheres are totally changed, and so the “first series” worlds are all worlds who’s populations have volunteered- or at least 75% have- to act as the test beds for this new technology.

When those tests are finished we will begin full fledged terraforming projects all across the Empire, this project may take years or even decades but when it is finished our people will thrive as never before, and I am honored to lead such a brave and advanced people to their future…” Leonidas’ picture faded as the Icaran flag waved on screen and a list of “first series” worlds showed on the screen of every Icaran household within the empire.
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BTW just for those who did not realize this since it did kind of blend together the "Actual" title of this whole story overall is:
From the Beginning and yes I know I did not spell it correctly in the title
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Another full chapter coming tomorrow:
In the mean time here is a chapter on the technology in use by the Icarans of the 25th century:

Ship technology:

Artificial Gravity:
Icaran scientists discovered back in the 19th century just how bad the effects of long term weightlessness on the human body could be, and so they went about solving this problem.
At first the Icarans used centrifuges to rotate the crew while they slept, as well as a centrigue for the crew to exercise in. This however was of limited use as ships of the day were only moving solar distances (aka in Sol only) and after a few months of deployment even these measures began to wear off.

The development of rotating sections followed, these sections are literally rotating potions of the ship (located in the center of the craft) that provided limited gravity for the crew quarters and command sections of a space craft. This technology quickly replaced the centrifuge as the primary "sim gravity" environment.

With the discovery of early Ion reaction drives however a new problem arose, the gravity generated by a rotating section would kill any crewmember on a ship that was at full acceleration using the Ion reaction drive, some ships had the rotating section tear apart entirely which caused catastrophic hull breakdown (the ships were torn apart by their own gravity)those ships that were not destroyed outright suffered another effect, their rotating section did not have an "external" gravity field and because of that the inertial force caused by the reaction drive turned the crew to paste.

Modern GFGs: Gravity Field Generators were the Last and most advanced development in Artificial gravity technology.
A gravity field generator creates a "grav bubble" around a starship this means that the ship's hull is exerting it's own gravity field, this generators' basic functions are classified by state security, however what is known is that the "grav field" created by a GFG negates the force of inertia or foreign gravity sorces on a starship.
The GFG is a necessity when it comes to warp travel as well, without the external gravity field and "grav sail" a starships crew is turned to a substance with the consistency of chunky salsa, however because of the "external field and grav sail reaction" the internal gravity of a starship must be turned off, leaving the crew in absolute zero gravity during the duration of the warp jump.

Propulsion and FTL travel:

The original engines used by Icaran solar cruisers were chemical rockets which were effective only for short bursts of speed leaving a ship to "coast" the rest of the way to it's target.

Ion Reaction Engines were the first "true" space propulsion system developed by Icaran scientists during the early twentieth century.
An Ion reaction engine forces superheated Ions out of a “vent” in the engine, this reaction propels the ship at great speed, early drives could manage a maximum acceleration of 200 gravities, more recent models could max out at 450 gravities.

Quantum Reaction Engines, the most advanced engine developed thus far by the Icaran Royal Science academy the QRE uses the new quantum reactor‘s excess energies to create a stream of anti-matter particles known to Icarans as kerons (k-ear-on) to accelerate a vessel, the quantum stream, unlike Ion propulsion uses the ship’s aft gravity field to focus it’s propulsive power even further. A modern quantum reaction engine can accelerate a starship at nearly 555.92 gravities.

“Solar Sail”: The newest development in drive technology the so called “Solar sail” is not remotely related to it’s ancient “material” counterpart, instead the modern “Solar sail” is a modification of a starship’s “grav sail”, instead of “hooking” the power of the warp into forward motion the “solar sail” “hooks” the so-called solar winds and channels that amazing power into a gravity field which, when combined with the power of quantum reaction engines provides a ship nearly 1,000 gravities of acceleration.
An interesting side effect of the Solar sail is that along with greatly increasing a starship’s speed it also dramatically improves the performance of a vessel’s GFG which allows the “inertial compensation process” to keep up with the extreme speeds achieved by a starship with the Solar Sail in much the same way as the gravity sail allows a vessel to enter the warp without mashing the crew.

Gravity Sail: The gravity sail or “grav sail” for short is a focused extension of a starship’s gravity field. The grav sail its self when fully deployed extends 2 kilometers afore and astern of the starship using it, the forward grav sail “catches” an energy wave of a warp point and begins to pull a ship into the whirling tides of the warp, the aft sail then repels the energy wave produced by the forward sail which pushes the ship the rest of the way into the warp.
Gravity sails dissipate the gravities of acceleration that would normally be felt by literally creating a null gravity environment within the “bubble’ created by the two sails, this null gravity environment also completely neutralizes the effects of inertia allowing a ship in the warp to accelerate at an estimated 6,000,000 gravities.

The warp: The warp is in essence another dimension wherein the rules of “real space” physics do not apply, contrary to earlier beliefs that for every point in real space there is a point in “hyperspace” Icaran scientists discovered that in the warp there is no such thing as a “non-solar” region (in other words there is no void between the massive gravity fields produced by a solar system) in the warp.
When a starship enters the warp it does not have any choice in it’s navigation as such, but instead a warp point is created by the gravity of a star tearing a hole into the dimensional fabric of space time which is directly connected to another hole in space time in another star system, because there is no “void” in the warp a starship entering one warp point travels nearly instantaneously to another starsystem (depending on the acceleration generated by an object penetrating the warp).
The nearly instantaneous travel does effect the human psyche however and creates a phenomenon known as “jump shock” where the human brain is stunned into a momentary comatose status, resulting in extreme nausea and disorientation Lasting up to several seconds, scientists recently developed a medicine that effectively shuts off jump shock, but even this drug has it’s side effects and the nausea of a jump remains even though the disorientation and momentary comatose status have been negated successfully.

Weapons and Defense Technology:

I-Laser: The so called I-Laser (Imperial Laser) is the most recent development in weapons technology, and the most devastating weapon developed by the Icarans thus far. The I-laser is a direct descendent of the generation 12 anti-proton weapons tests run during the early stages of the Phong War when it was discovered that the Phased poloron beam would not suffice in dealing with forces such as the Manti Star Nation who’s superior ships and weapons outclassed the Icaran’s own by generations.
The I-laser is not actually a laser as such, it is a compressed fusion/anti-matter burst focused by a laser beam into a coherent force that proves most devastating on reaction to solid materials and energy shields alike.
I-Lasers have two settings, a slicing mode for when a warship makes a quick attack pass on a ship or group of ships. The second mode is a piercing mode used only in a line-to-line battle where two fleets line up and fire at each other, the piercing mode is no more or no less powerful then the slice mode but it is better suited for attacking capital ships in a solid battle formation.

Phased shield Generators: The phased shield generators workings are classified top secret by the Icaran Security council, the only thing that can be said by Icaran law is that the Phased shield pushes incoming fire out of our reality by phasing it into non existence.
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Finally finished! Excellent story, Starhawk. First rate stuff.
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Heh I'm not finished in fact here is that promised chapter:

This chapter is rated PG-13 due to graphic violence and language (mainly violence) I recomend you not read this chapter if you do not wish to read a very visceral story of the Icaran ground war.

2419.6 Blood and death on hill 529
Mestra 2 fell swiftly before the advance of the 1st Icara regiment, 3,000 Phong had died in the defense of their world or because they got mixed up into the crossfire and were killed by accident, either way the Admiralty did not overly care about how many Phong died as long as the planet fell and all resistance was ended. The Icaran army regiment guarded the world for a week before an SS brigade took over the task and allowed the troopers to get back to their job.

That was two weeks ago now and Mestra I was proving a much tougher nut to crack, the initial landing alone killed ten Icarans when their dropship was blown out of the sky by a Phong RPS (Rocket propelled stab*) and the damned Phong had dug themselves in so deep that the Icaran tanks had to bLast at entire mountain sides just to hit a single cluster of resistance.
It was the job of Section 025 red (better known as the Razor Claws by the Icaran 1st) to capture such a position known as Hill 529 to local intel, a force of some 500 Phong warriors in the Charlie sector were being led from the bunker that now lay before the Icaran troopers.
“Alright Ladies, let’s get this job done, Brekenridge, Canowsky keep those Wolfhounds** on patrol, make sure we don’t get snuck up on while we’re dealing with the yellow bastards inside.” Lieutenant Kemper whispered into his com as he slinked forward along the mountainside with the rest of his section.
It was well into this world’s “night” cycle if one could call a red sky “night” and it was Kemper’s hope that most of the Phong would be asleep, or at the very least not fully combat ready, in the darkness two Wolfhound armed buggies raced away from the infantry and began circling the area.

After what seemed an eternity of crawling on his belly Kemper and his section arrived at the armored door to the bunker, it looked like rock but ground penetrating scans showed it for what it really was, a 2 meter thick battlesteel door to a Phong command center that had to be neutralized. Kemper grinned to himself, to make matters worse his section had been dropped off with orders to capture the Phong leadership intact and alive!
“Lieutenant the charge set, we’re ready.” Sgt Hailey jabbed her shoulder into the Lieutenant to get his attention, when he turned around she pointed at the door where two engineers had just finished placing a compressed “one ton” nuke.

“Alright, assault squad stand by for entry, squad two and three follow us in, squad four I want you to stay outside and cover our collective ***.” Kemper said as he pulled a small silver pad out of his hard suit’s breast pocket, after a moment to make sure everyone was clear he pressed the green button and silently count down in his head (5.….4.….3.….2.….1.….there!) a brilliant flash and a shockwave that rattled Kemper’s teeth signaled the detonation of the compressed nuke***.
“Go go go! Assault!” Kemper shouted as he stood up with the rest of the assault squad and ran into the breach they had just created, his “eye-piece” showed no life signs in the airlock they had just broken into but Kemper knew better then to take that as a sign of light defenses.
A scream from just ahead of him made the Lieutenant drop to the deck, and just in time a mono-molecular beam sliced along the wall and decapitated the man behind Kemper, another Icaran trooper shot out the generation point before the beam killed anyone else, but the beam had done it’s job, the trooper in front of Kemper was relatively short as Icarans went and the beam did not decapitate her as it did the man behind Kemper, instead it sliced off the top of her head only and left her in shock, twitching and seizing, a medic raced over but after only seconds he looked back at Kemper and shook his head.
Already two of his troopers had died, but that was no excuse for rash behavior, Kemper slowly advanced his section in a leap frog pattern, throwing shockwave grenades to make sure the corridors were clear of traps before advancing. So far no one had resisted and that made Kemper more uneasy and nervous then if he had to face down hundreds of Phong,, but there were no Phong waiting, corridor after corridor met them with only silence and the occasional booby trap that was disarmed by the Shockwave grenades.

Nearly twenty minutes had gone bye and the three assaulting Squads had reached a vast chamber near the heart of the base and still no resistance had met them, Just as Kemper was about to order his unit forward again a noise boomed into the room from unseen speakers, a noise the Icarans did not recognize at first, it was like crackling paper or a fireplace with a roaring fire. Suddenly comprehension dawned on Kemper, it was Phong laughter!
“AMBUSH! Fireteams cover your backs AMBUSH!” just as he shouted dozens of pulser darts tore through the Icarans, blood sprayed from torn arteries like some nightmarish geyser, the screaming of the wounded and dying filled the corridors, the stunned Icarans returned fire and succeeded in killing many Phong, but they were totally outnumbered and had been hit completely off guard, within moments all 36 Icarans were on the deck.

The Phong advanced from their hiding places and walked forward to inspect the bodies of the fallen Icarans, bayoneting the downed Icarans at the edge of the Icaran formation, just to be sure they were dead.
A Phong warrior walked over to Kemper and kicked him in the ribs with an armored boot, a grunt startled the Phong, who whirled his rifle around, too late to save his life however as an Icaran combat knife drove into it’s groin, cutting open the Phong’s main arteries in his legs.
A second Phong stood stunned behind Kemper as the Lieutenant whirled around with his assault rifle.
“Hey baby, you miss me?” Kemper sneered at the Phong warrior and depressed the firing stud on his rifle, the AP beam tore the Phong warrior in half and Kemper whirled around to look over his shattered formation.
“NOW!” The shout echoed along the walls and everywhere in the formation Icarans came to life and began killing the startled Phong warriors.
Kemper heard the satisfying whine of Anti-proton fire and the equally satisfying scream of dying Phong as if they were in a distant background, his focus fell onto Phong troopers that were attempting to fall back and reform their ranks, they all died swiftly as his beams swept across them.
A third of the Icarans was all that remained after the devastating ambush but Kemper was unwilling to give up here, and he could not call in the other squad outside or he would risk leaving his only way out open to enemy attack.

The advance continued until finally the sole remaining squad reached the massive armored doors at the heart of the facility, it took two compressed nukes to breakdown the door and admit the Icaran assault. The troopers rushed into the room weapons at the ready and stopped in stunned silence.
The sounds of sobbing brought the advancing Icarans to a halt, the room was no military command center, it was filled with Phong females and children, not even a single weapon was detected in their midst, several of the younger Phong ran towards the soldiers and began chittering relentlessly in their alien language.
“HALT! Stay where you are!” the Icarans shouted as the youngsters continued to run towards them.
“Damn it STOP!” Sergeant Hailey shouted at the top of her lungs but the aliens did not seem to understand.
“Get me a GA’DAMNED TRANSLATOR TO TELL THEM TO STOP!” Kemper shouted as he lowered his rifle, one of the Icarans raced forward, a translator unit strapped to his hip.
“Stop where you are!” he yelled in Icaran and the machine chattered out an equally loud shout in Phong.
The youngsters continued to run at the Icarans even after they had been told to stop twice by the translator, they were almost in hand to hand range and Kemper made the most terrifying decision of his life.
“Firing line! Cripple them if you can FIRE!” his order was met with the silent obedience of Icaran discipline and the entire squad fired into the advancing youths, three of the ones in front were cut to pieces as more then one trooper had focused their weapon on them by accident, several of the youths in the back stopped running forward and hit the dirt, others had limbs severed by the sweeping beams.
“CEASE FIRE!” Kemper’s order was echoed by Sgt Hailey and as suddenly as it had begun the Icaran fire ceased.
“Oh my God” a trooper behind Kemper said stunned, another trooper vomited into his helmet, the noise of the self cleaning unit covering the noise.
“Medic up front NOW, Lois cover him, get moving damn it!” Hailey shouted, she shoved the medic forward, Kemper forced himself back to reality and looked around the room, there were still a LOT of females and children hutted in fear, some of the more scared young ones tried to stand up and run away from the Icarans, but they were jerked down by their parents or other adults who had just witnessed the massacre.
The five youths of the group that had not been wounded or killed in the Icaran volley hugged the limp bodies of the dead or chittered into the “ears” of the wounded in attempts to comfort them. The Icaran mdic gently moved them aside and began running scans on the wounded while PFC Lois covered him.

“Why did they keep running at us sir?” Hailey whispered as she came closer to Kemper, she too looked pale and sick, but her voice remained calm and cold.
“Sir, I may be able to answer that.” The translator stepped forward after talking to several of the Phong in the room.
“The soldiers that ambushed us in the corridor were not just soldiers, several of them were command officials for this region, and sir, those youngsters are their children, when they saw us they knew we must have killed their parents and so they declared a sort of blood oath, similar to our custom of debt of blood except that instead of service provided by future generations, their blood oath requires the offender be bled.” The translator paused and looked sick for a moment, Kemper cleared his throat in a sign of impatience.
“Sir, they would have tried to bleed us, not kill us, a cut or bight would suffice by their tradition since they are the losing force here.” The trooper shook visibly.
Kemper looked at the stunned faces of his soldiers, they had all just become baby killers, even Phong did not deserve what had just been done to them, not this up close and personal, not over some stupid tradition!
The Lieutenant slammed his fist against a nearby wall and cursed silently to himself that fortune should put HIS unit in this position, they had failed their mission when they slaughtered the ambush force that had included the command staff of their region and NOW they had killed four orphaned children and left another seven with horrible injuries ranging from severed limbs to opened guts.
Kemper forced those thoughts from his mind and remembered the original Haden base with it’s millions of people, including children that had been destroyed by the Phong, so a few enemy children had been stupid enough to try and attack an Icaran firing line, so what he had ordered them cut down, they had become combatants the second they refused to comply with his orders and he made sure everyone of his soldiers knew it.

Less then a week later Lieutenant Kemper and the survivors of the Razor Teeth were awarded the Icaran sunburst medal for heroism above and beyond the call of duty, two days after that Mestra 1 had fallen to Icaran forces and the 1st regiment began occupation duty until an SS brigade could arrive.

*[Rocket propelled stab]A "stab" is a weapon that breaks apart into several metal disks when reaching a certain altitude, these disks travel at super sonic speeds and can slice apart any dropship or fighter in service.

**[Wolfhounds]: A wolfhound is a three person armored buggie with either a gatling style Anti-proton gun or a surface to surface rocket launcher.

*** [Compressed Nuke]: A compressed Nuke is a weapon that focuses the entire nuclear reaction into a "bottle" similar to how a traditional shaped charge focuses it's explosive energy. The radiation is sucked into the bLast area by the preasure of the "shaped" nuclear bLast and leaves only a small area radioactive,and even that radioactive area is harmless to anyone wearing a heardsuit or vac suit.
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2419.7 Remembrance:
Captain Yu Lin Pe walked the long corridor alone, she enjoyed the silence of the moment, to be allowed to be alone with her thoughts, probably for the Last time today, she paused and breathed deeply, recycled air of course but still it was new air to her, she had been in space for months with neither hide nor hair of planetary or even domed spaciousness or “new“ air, it was all the same metallic ship‘s smell, and finally she was in a wide open space by herself with “fresh air”, yet she had to hurry through it and meet her new command. She felt sorry that her brother was still in the 1st fleet and was too far away to have arrived here on time but at the same time she was oddly grateful for it as well, she could say hello to her new command and goodbye to her father all at the same time.
She had been invited to the shipyards of Mavin Parsis II months ago, so that she could arrive in time for the launch of the Royal Navy’s newest and for the moment most powerful warship class in Icaran space, normally the ship’s first officer would have taken her to the new commander but this was a special circumstance, this was the Last tribute Icara could give to a hero who fell all too early in the war. The HMS Yu Hing Pe, the first of the Admiral Yu Hing Pe class super dreadnoughts the first two of which had just come off the production line.
Both were being assigned to the 3rd fleet and Yu Lin had the honor to take command of the warship bearing her father’s name and become the new flag captain of Rear Admiral William Ross a thought which roused many confused feelings within the young woman, she and Ross had known each other since she was 15, now she was getting close to 40-though thanks to modern medicine she was in the same top physical condition (and youthful appearance) that she had been in when she was 19- they had always been close friends and she even tried kissing him once when she was 16 but he pulled away and left an awkwardness that Lasted for months, she had always been attracted to him and got the feeling he felt the same way, yet they never seemed able to discuss it….
She inhaled deeply, deliberately breaking her train of thoughts and began meditating as she walked, much the way her grandmother had taught her, though Yu Lin herself was not a Buddhist like her grandparents or parents she often meditated to calm her nerves or clear her thoughts.
Before she realized it Lin was standing in the main gallery of the shipyard, a bulky man in the formal tan uniform of an engineering corps Admiral walked forward and smartly saluted her, in the tradition of the Navy any captain receiving their command must be saluted by ANY officer bellow the rank of Grand Admiral or equivalent rank, she smiled and returned the salute.
“I am EC Admiral Tankers, Captain I must say it is an honor having a member of the Yu family here in person, and more then that taking command of a starship we built, especially one that bares the name of such a great man as your father.” The man smiled broadly at Yu and part of her became very curious when she noticed his eyes seemed to wonder over her body just a little bit.
“Well Admiral Tankers I look forward to taking her out, but at the moment I’d just like to see what she looks like if you don’t mind.” Tankers flushed a little as he realized that he had barely even let her step into the room before intercepting her.
The Admiral guided her to a camera that was overlooking the shipyard’s construction slip, Yu’s eyes widened and she felt herself smile as she caught a glimpse of the Yu Hing Pe she was 250,000 tons more massive and 100 meters longer then a dreadnought, and had an additional 500 crewmembers, she was sleek and deadly looking bearing a striking physical similarity to her smaller cousin.
“When can I go aboard” Yu asked gleefully as she stared at the massive and beautiful new warship.
“Actually Captain I was wondering if you would like to go aboard after the party, of course if you’d prefer you can go aboard later.” Tankers grinned at the glowing new Captain, it was like watching a parent with their new child he thought to himself as she practically fell over herself to confirm she’d like to board as soon as possible.

The “party” drudged on for two hours, to Yu it seemed like an eternity though she did enjoy the opportunity to meet Commander Jason Styles, her new XO, he was a witty if somewhat bookish man with an obvious flair for the comedic, he had even managed to make Governor Shaun (Stoney) Garret to erupt into a belly laugh that could have shaken the bulkheads. But the man was also a brilliant officer and had skipped two grades in promotion to achieve his current post as Commander at the young age of only 21 years of age, she still marveled at how easily he was able to excuse himself from a “mandatory” party without stepping on anyone’s toes and found she envied that ability as there were only so many blue blooded noble wannabes that she could talk to n a single night without wanting to blow her brains out with a pulser.
But finally the bore fest had come to an end and she was able to board her starship, she wasted no time whatever in making her way to the bridge.
It was a marvel of modern technology, the bridge was a similar two tiered configuration to that of a dreadnought except for the additional stations, including one in particular which drew Lin’s attention to it like flypaper. The Neural Interface was the most recent combat technological advance it allowed the officer to link minds with the other “linked” officers of a battle group (which of course meant there would need to be multiple super dreadnoughts in the fleet) and then connected those minds to the AI junction of a “linked” fleet increasing the combat reflexes of a starships offensive and defensive system as well as allowing more precise-and thus more stable-warp jumps.
The Super dreadnought was 4.1 kilometers long and Yu made sure to investigate almost every inch of it for six hours before her launch, she rendezvoused with the Warden two days after launch and then began their long journey to join the 3rd fleet in the war against the Phong.
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Is very good, the influence of David Weber / Honor Harrington Series is obvious (is one of my Favorites).
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