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The next chapter will come tomorrow most likely as I want to flesh out my ideas of how to write it (It's gonna be a big one trust me).

Heh well if you don't mind me saying so, and if this doesn't make me sound a little freaky. Humans are Humans and Icara is in an era where a single battle squadron could destroy an entire planet and kill you entire nation if you let down your guard so they don't have room to be compromising or "enlightened" so although by my story's viewpoint they are the "good guys" it's more accurate to say they are survivors and if they have to eliminate others they will if it ensures that survival.

I never understood why so many writers assume that a futuristic Humanity would be so peaceful and willin to coexist with others, I mean when you stop and think about it sure we are more likely to become much more merciful and "enlightened" when it comes to "our own kind" that being nations but when humanity spreads to the stars (if ever) do they honestly think every colony will have the same heritage or beleifs as each other? I doubt it.
Most likely something like the HH Universe will happen where Humanity divides into seperate "star nations" and although I doubt the future would be nothing but war all the time I doubt it will only be "evil aliens" that want to wipe us out lol.

The Icaran galaxy in this story is somewhat restricted to game terms (I.E. My "cold war" with a certain faction is entirely roleplay and the AI probobly doesn't realize it is a cold war) but as far as the story its self goes, these are colonies that launched from earth Hundreds of years ago and are now stepping out to find a galaxy that is theirs for the taking and where other human factions and even an alien faction "phong" are intent on the same prize.
And to any nation that has the chance to rule not just it's own planet but an entire galaxy deciding to be oh so goody and peaceful with everyone around them will probobly result in their being annexed by a power that did not feel so "enlightened".

Icara is brutal where brutality is required (unlike the Federation which always managed to show compassion even where brutality would have ended the war much soon) and the Empire needs resources for it's economy to survive so colonies are needed for that.
And let's not forget that a world with Icara's very low infant mortality rate and advanced medicines and life prolonging treatments will have population growth that can't be handled by one planet forever, and so more worlds are also required for land or else you'd have overcrowding and poverty everywhere.

Anyway should I have saved that for the storyline or is it okay that I explained Icara's motives and "justifications" to you out of the story?
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2403.2-2404.0
“Praetor Lysander we no longer have a choice, the Handra supply base must be re-colonized if we do not keep a permanent fleet base in that system we are just asking for those Phong to invade us!.” Admiral Lord Tyson Babcock had a habit-a rather annoying one as far as Lysander was concerned-of keeping his voice low and polite even when he was chewing someone’s *** off, and since day one of the first colony’s launch he had condemned those lords who overruled the Admiralty about sending millions of civilians to the original Haden base.
“Praetor I agree with Tyson on this matter, the original colonization was the biggest blunder our nation has made so far and I think not sending another expedition would be even more foolish.” Alexander Hallice, Lord High Admiral of the entire Icaran Royal Navy was far more stubborn and held a lot more credit then his lesser known colleague within the nobility of Icara and as such his word on any matter could shake even Lysander’s views around.
“Opening that doorway now would lead to a war we can not win, our resources at this time are to unstable and our navy too small to repel any invasion from that particular region of space Your Highness, however I do not believe we should send this colony into the fray unguarded like our lordships did it’s predecessor.” Hallice hid the traces of a grimace of disgust by taking a sip of the hot Icaran coffee that he had all too rarely these days.”
“Isn’t HMS Saber on location Sir?” Babcock raised his right eyebrow as his superior cocked his head in a manner he often did while he thought about important matters.
“Yes but she is low on supplies and munitions, and I doubt a single frigate could neutralize an entire Phong squadron, don’t you?” Just the tone in his voice as he looked over to his Praetor suggested that he knew Saber wouldn’t stand a chance on that post alone no matter what any arrogant lordship thought.
“You realize Admirals that to authorize something that would cost that much money and that many resources I would have to grant the house of lords permission to send a full fledged colony expedition don’t you?” Lysander frowned as he thought of the amount of pain his *** would be in over the next few days trying to convince the lords to at least minimize the number of colonists they sent.
“Well then our lordships would certainly want better defense wouldn’t they your highness?” Hallice said with a distinctive grin as he finished sipping his coffee and placed his cup gracefully on the table. Hallice was almost 80 Terran Years old but thanks to modern medicine he looked like a man a third his age, and his mind certainly held every ounce of wit and tactical knowledge it had over 50 years ago.
“What are you proposing Alexander?” Lysander asked in a deliberate manner as he thought about just how much money this whole operation would cost his Nation, not to mention the time and resources.
“Oh, well Admiral HMS Saber should certainly stay on station, our supply base on Handra-the new name given it by The Admiralty-can certainly fix her up and get her in shape once we’ve established even a basic infrastructure there.” Hallice paused a moment cocking his head in thought as numbers and names plied through his rapier like mind.
HMS Enterprise Can certainly leave within the month, the asteroid damage she sustained pulling that freighter out of the Swift asteroid belt will be repaired by then, and I can guess Ross would like to get out in real space again instead of getting stuck at home with one of only three destroyers in the fleet.
And I beleive HMS Farrogot can be ready a month after that, considering the construction time of a colony ship and it’s slower speeds compared to our new destroyers, I think both destroyers will be on station only a month after initial colonization.” The High Admiral hummed quietly as he thought.
“And I think the next two destroyers built at Icara and Brandenburg could arrive there in about 6 months so we’ll have an entire effective battle group there within a years time.” Alexander grinned again as his Praetor began to nod. Braddock too was nodding. A decent battle group of four destroyers and a frigate would definitely be enough to guard that border, and maybe even go on the offensive, as long as they could keep the lords out of this.
“Good idea Alexander, I do believe I can overrule the Lords on the matter of numbers of ships easily, after all the defense of our Nation is the only concern we should have right now, and if any of those Lords or Ladies turn this down I’ll remind them of the mistakes the collegues made with the first colony.” Lysander nearly spat as he considered those five lords who now hung dead and cryopreserved outside of the Admiralty building (showing just how the navy felt about fools), those five who had gone behind the backs of the house of Lords and given “unofficial” permission for several companies to ready a colony for Haden, those same five lords who then refused to allow a naval presence to escort the colony ship under the excuse of it “making the colony ship a target for hostile forces”. Instead 1 million soldiers and 31 million civilians were blown apart by a single enemy frigate that could have been stopped by Saber!
“Admiral do you believe that Saber can protect that base by herself before those warships arrive?” Lysander’s tone was bitter as nightmare images rushed into his memory, the images taken from Haden by remote drones.
“Highness, I believe Saber can protect her from any one ship, and possibly any two ships we’ve seen those yellow bastards throw at us thus far.” Hallice said with an unusual gusto as he absently fixed one of the stars on his collar.
“Then Admirals, you have a go, just get those two destroyers ready for deployment before I have to talk to the lords, or at least make it look like they are ready.” Lysander said with a wink as he guided his guests to the door.

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“Sir, now that we have approval for the deployment of an entire squadron to Handra do you believe we can get the go ahead on an assault into Fornax?” Babcock asked quietly as he and the High Admiral walked along the great corridor of the Capital Building.
‘I think His Highness will give us permission to do anything it takes to defend Handra base, if that happens to include going into Fornax and removing any threatening presence in said system.” The glean in Hallice’ eyes was clear as he looked at his junior officer and smiled, he liked Babcock though he really couldn’t figure out just what about the energetic young man (only 42 E-Years) he liked."Then so be it." He finished with a smile.
“Excellent Sir!, with your permission I’ll get together with Captain’s Ross and Holly later and discuss possible maneuvers they can take to force the Phong into making themselves a “reasonable threat”. Babcock’s own face lit as he considered the possibilities. Though he would have preferred to be in the field himself, commanding a fleet in battle, but unfortunately for him and just about seventy-two percent of all IRN personnel there just weren’t enough ships to crew much less form a full “fleet” worthy of the name….though within a few years that would hopefully all be changed.
“Very good Admiral, I’ll have discuss the new naval budget with the House of Commons and the rest of the Admiralty tomorrow morning.” The smile turned to a sour grimace as the Admiral considered the meeting that lay before him, he hated talking about money and “resource allocation” but now a days that seemed to be more of a hot topic for him then strategy and command.
The two Admirals talked idly as they walked down the long corridors to head to their respective duties.

Five months later the new colony ship set down on Handra base and Captain Sandra Fowler’s ship turned her running lights to a blinking row pattern signaling her salute to the nobleman aboard her.
A month later the destroyer pair of Enterprise and Farrogot arrived to take up station around Handra, both ships signaling salute to their “little sister” as Saber was affectionately called by the two destroyer’s crews.

2404.1-4
“Sir incoming missile at point three, oh five niner!” Tactical officer Remeraz blurted as the main battle screen in Enterprise's bridge showed 3 yellow dots appear at a range of just under five thousand clicks.
“Helm, Evasive maneuver Jager Nine two.” Ross voice was icy as his helmsman began twisting and turning the Icaran destroyer in an attempt to evade the enemy missiles that were closing at two thousand clicks per second.
The third missile had Ross far more worried as it’s glowing light code closed at over one thousand clicks faster then the other two….the light code signaling the missile’s approach was moving far to fast and suddenly Enterprise rocked and shuddered as the impact alarms blared.
“Sir Cannon one is gone, we’ve also lost missile tube two! And starboard engine three.” Commander Pallins sounded shocked but as she read off the damage list she seemed angry that her ship had been caught with it’s pants down by that third missile.
“Thank you Commander, What is the status of Saber?” Ross watched the holotank intently as the frigates own missiles closed on one of the enemy ships.
“Her port cannon battery is down, she’s leaking atmosphere on two decks and a quarter of her crew is dead or wounded sir.” The comn officer of the watch seemed like he was about to wet his pants but then a brief cheer from the weapons commander made him jump clear out of his skin as he whirled around to look a the holotank.
“Got one sir, the second enemy ship is down sir!”
“Thank you mister Saunderson please try not to distract our other officers.” Ross snipped at the young officer and the man just about crapped his vac suit as he turned back to his station sheepishly.
“Sir Saber is gone.” Tactical said as the frigate’s light code winked out .
“Closing on enemy ship, baring three, two seven mark.” That same mechanical voice that had announced Saber’s destruction seemed to chant out the words as Tactical Officer Remeraz watched his displays like they were the only thing in the universe.
“Guns, take her out as we come to bare!”
“Aye skipper, cannon crews standing by, missiles locked…..firing in three…..two….one, birds away, cannons firing!” the missiles slid from their rack with a dull droning sound and the distinctive thumping of heavy cannons was almost musical in Ross’ ears as the enemy light code winked out in the holotank.
The lights on Enterprise’s bridge returned to normal and the damage codes winked off as the other ships of the squadron reactivated their transponders, winking their light codes back into existence on the holotank.
“All hands stand down battle stations, I repeat stand down battle stations. The drill is over.” Pallins said almost cheerfully as she started reading the computer’s assessment of their performance during the battle drill.

The Enterprise Battlegroup had been standing at Hadran station for three months so far and run twenty two battle drills with varying pairings on who played the opfor and who played the defender. The entire squadron had done rather well by her opinion though captain Fowler ended up with a grimace more often then not as her ship had been destroyed twelve of the past twenty drills and only destroyed one of the enemy ships every other time, But even Fowler had to realize that saber had done more then pull her weight in each drill.

“Alright ladies and gentleman let’s return to Hadran base, And good job to all.” Ross smiled at his exec and unzipped the vac suit that he had been wearing for the past six hours. They may save your life but they sure didn’t save your comfort, he thought as he felt “fresh” air blowing against his tunic again.
“Sarah you have the watch.”
“Aye sir have the watch.” Sarah was still cheerful as she unzipped her vac suit and sat in the comfortable captain's chair to take Enterprise into port.
Three months of peace on the Phong frontier had the odd effect of making the crews more nervous then having at least one stand up fight, because the anticipation of a Phong assault coming any day was just not what they were trained to deal with, so battle drills and various surprise inspections were a regular distraction and one of the few ways to keep them busy without burning them out. And quite frankly Sarah Pallins loved battle drills because they made sure her crew would not let Captain Ross down no matter what and if he wasn't let down then the Navy wouldn't be let down.

2404.5
It was 0200 when the first alerts began howling their warnings in the C3 center of Handra’s military base and within five minutes every civil and military alarm on the planet was triggered. Startled civilians went rushing for the local shelters why the local military personnel on the base rushed to their Posts.
Handra’s military governor, Lord Korey Aznoble entered the command center at a frantic pace the second he heard the first alarm, by time the civil alerts started up he was already standing over the holomap of the Handra system frowning.
‘This makes if fifteen minutes right roger?” Aznoble’s frown grew darker as the senior military officer, Commodore Roger McMan, nodded.
“M’Lord it is a single Phong frigate, and our battle group can easily destroy it, my fear is that it’s a trap of some kind, I’d rather not send the entire squadron to engage her because I don’t want to leave this planet unguarded.” The Commodore’s face grew pale as he remembered what had happened to Haden base.
“What do you suggest Commodore?” Aznoble frowned as he saw the light signature of the enemy frigate closing in on Handra. “Do we let that frigate come here and then have the squadron intercept it in orbit?” He asked as that ominous light signature continued to close in on his planet.
“Sir that would be a very bad idea, if our ships are not in exactly the right position when that ship arrives in orbit we could face massive casualties before they get into an intercept position. I recommend we send one of the destroyers to intercept it. I’d suggest Ross’ as he’s the most experienced combat officer we have on station at the moment.” McMan loathed the fact that he had to report to a man that was not military, especially one who did not understand the physics of space combat.
“Very Well Commodore dispatch Ross, if he fails, at leas we’ll have a fallback.” Aznoble grimaced again before leaving the Commodore’s side and walking over to a secondary command station to observe the deployment himself.

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Meanwhile in space the four warships had not been idle, their sensors had the advantage of not being hindered by atmosphere and Ross suspected that his crews had manned battle stations before the planetary commander even knew what was happening.
But when the message did come through Ross clenched his fists,the Commodore ordered his ship to engage an unknown enemy starship alone and worse then that he ordered him to intercept the enemy vessel at 20 light minutes, it would take any of the other warships at least a day to arrive and back him up should anything go wrong and by then they'd likely just find his wreckage.
Ross suspected that Lord Aznoble had something to do with the distance involved in the intercept because when it came down to it the man was a coward and wanted to keep battle as far away from him personally far more then he wanted to keep the battle away from Handra, a proper military officer would have ordered at most a 10 light minute intercept so that reinforcements could arrive in a shorter amount of time but even that would be pushing it for most admirals.
It had been one day at full thrust, with the enemy ship closing on their position the whole time and finally Enterprise was closing in on her target.
“Time to intercept two minutes fifteen seconds sir.” Tactical officer Ramerez chanted in his normal mechanical tone .
“All stations report full battle readiness sir.” Sarah said icily as she watched the status board.
“Thank you Commander….Tactical.” Ross said grimly as he waited anxiously for his ship’s first engagement.

The first volley of missiles streaked from the Destroyer’s prow launchers at just under 10,000 kilometers range, their drives glowed brilliantly like three tiny new stars as they carried their deadly payloads toward another tiny star that was not even visible from the bridge of HMS Enterprise.
The holotank showed a small red line appear from the enemy light dot signifying a long stream of point defense rounds pouring into space desperately clawing at the missiles that were closing in on it. The point defense go lucky once and nailed the sprint missile, unfortunately for the Phong warship the two more powerful missiles were already in too close and the Holotank on the Icaran destroyer showed two clear hits.

“Sir they are closing to cannon range, I don’t think we got their engines sir.” Remerez mechanical tone had a nervous edge to it as he watched the enemy ship close within visual range of the ship's cameras.
The bridge’s main monitor suddenly switched over from a star view to a magnified image of the enemy vessel. As they watched the magnified image the bridge crew saw three small bursts of light come from her port side and immediatly began to brace for the impact that was sure to follow.
The holotank clearly showed three incoming shells to match each of the bursts of light, causing Ross to squint sharply and grit his teeth as he realized that by time those objects appearedo on display the shells would already be far closer.
His ship rocked and loud explosions could be heard from other sections of the ship and the damage board came to life with color all across his ship.
“Sir, cannon crew two is gone, we’ve also lost the sprint missile launcher and two engines.” Remerez announced as the remaining cannon crews returned fire automatically, the ship’s remaining cannons roared in fury and sent a devastating broadside into the already damaged hull of the Phong Frigate, the first shot missed entirely but the second struck home in what must have been the enemy frigate’s control centers because she immediately started to list and spin out of control.
“Good shooting guns!” Ross’ professionally calm tone momentarily broken as he watched the enemy ship spin out of control sending debris and what looked like bodies hurling out into space.
As the bridge crew watched the third round impact the enemy ship’s hull a gasp of universal disbelief and morbid amusement ran through them, the third round impacted at an odd angle into the hole that had been caused by one of the heavy missiles that had impacted earlier and instead of punching another hole the shell bounced at least tree times inside the enemy ship causing multiple internal explosions at various points until the shot finally breached a weakened part of the hull and exploded 10 meters of the enemy ship’s hull.

“My Lord, can you believe that?” Sarah’s voice sounded oddly amused by the display and Ross himself felt a strange urge to laugh at the almost comical occurrence but his training did not let him forget that many of his crew had probably been killed in the broadside that dying bastard had spat into his vessel.
“Status of the enemy…..”Ross’ sentence was cut off as the enemy ship seemed to simply begin collapsing in on herself, the entire middle of the ship seemed to just crumple as if she had been grabbed by some giant hand and squeezed.
“Cancel that tactical.” Ross said as he tabbed a control on his personal command panel.
“Damage Control here.” Chief Engineer John Lee’s voice sounded harsh as he answered his Capatin.
“Status Lee?” was all Ross could croak out as he observed the damage board with a scowl
“Sir, aside from what you’ve already been informed about, we’ve lost our forward gfg and I lost an entire work party when that damned broadside blew a hole in our engine room.” His voice made him sound ten years older then he was as he mentioned the loss of an entire 18 man work crew, his work crew.
Four others had died and ten were wounded in the engagement but HMS Enterprise had survived the first live combat action any Icaran destroyer had taken part in, and she had won.
"All hands stand by, we are returning to port." Captain Ross said as "cheerfully' as he could manage as he took count of the price his ship had paid.

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Thanks you guys I hope I can keep you entertained with the next chapter (also likely to be a LOOOONG chapter) which should be coming sometime either tomorrow or Wensday
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2405.2 Twilight
“I don’t know your highness but they just sent a message informing us that their population vetoed their treaty with us and that we can consider ourselves in a state of truce but not formal peace.” Governor Averato’s voice was grim as he stood before his Praetor on Icara after being summoned by a Crown courier ship (faster then any warship in the fleet do to it’s small size and large engine mounts) earlier that month when word of the treaty being broken reached Icara.
“Damned democracies never work! A mob can dictate who their entire world can talk to!” Praetor Leonidas fumed as he read the reports, the Rebels unilaterally withdrew for no other reason then their mob of a populace had decided that they did not want to be associated with a non-democratic government.
“Sir, I don’t believe they are going to move against us at this time, they’ve even pulled Admiral Magill’s fifth squadron out of Goin.” High Admiral Hallice said, his voice sounding more hopeful then either of his companions.
“Very well, Hallice keep Victory and Tiger on alert though, just in case those Rebels come back and decide they don’t want to be as peaceable.” leonidas said grumpily as he tossed the flexy with the rebel’s exact message aside.
“Michael’m afraid you’ll have to stay on Icara for a few months I have a lot to discuss with you.” Hallice said finally as he stood to leave, shaking Averato’s hand and Saluting Leonidas before withdrawing through the big oak doors.
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2405.6
“Stand by for warp point jump in five-zero seconds con.” Sarah Pallins voice sang out in her typical beautiful soprano as she sat cross legged in the captain’s chair, it was the middle of the third watch and Pallins couldn’t help but feel the real size of her ship at this time of night when only the bridge and engine room stood fully manned.
“Three-zero seconds con.” She said cheerfully as she took another sip of her coffee, or at least that’s what the navy called it, most of the civilian community wouldn’t touch navy coffee and even navy personnel joked about how it could seal a hull breach or patch a vac suit in an emergency. They were probably right too Sarah thought to herself as she read down the chronometer.
“One Zero seconds con.”

Ten seconds later and the Enterprise Squadron’s GFGs began melding with the brilliant blue swirl of the warp point; the familiar golden glow of GFG interaction was even more wondrous and magnificent then when a single ship made the jump.
The jump it’s self however was unusual for as her ship made that instantaneous transition from warp space to real space only one or two of her crew became nauseated and she herself felt an odd tingle that was actually quite pleasant.
Before she had any time to wonder about this new occurrence a brilliant flash on HMS King Roger brought her mind whirling back into the present, another flash on the destroyer leading the formation instantly brought the experienced commander’s hand slamming down onto the general quarters alarm.

The familiar battle klaxons howled and the GQ alarms joined in nano-seconds later, another flash on Kong Roger made Pallins wince, even more sickening was the stream of debris that floated away from the destroyer, debris that included bodies most of whom were not wearing vac suits.
“Sarah what the hell is going on?” The familiar voice of Captain Ross came behind Pallins and out of trained reflex she instantly stood saluted her superior and walked to her own command console.
“We are under attack sir, I can’t give you further details till our damned computers get over the jump shock.” Her voice was cold and professional but Ross recognized that sickened stress that she attempted to hide and he couldn’t blame her for he too grew sickened as he saw the bodies and wreckage drifting away from multiple hull breaches in King Roger.
“Sensors back on-line ma’am, I mean sir!” Tactical officer Rivera’s voice faltered as he realized his Captain had come onto the bridge….but he valiantly continued “Sir, three Phong Frigates have opened fire on our squadron King Roger and Manticore both ships are showing signs of heavy damage.”
“Thank you tactical, Guns do we have a shot yet!” Ross sat at his station and rubbed his hands together, trying to stop his sweating, his entire squadron had been ambushed and at least one of his ships was out of this fight.
“Gunnery crews have put in targeting coordinates sir, passing it to squadron wide and Firing!” Gunnery Officer Paul’s voice was the calmest on the bridge aside from his CO and the XO, and Ross allowed himself a brief second of appreciation that at least Lieutenant Paul was a combat veteran, the only one currently on the bridge aside from himself and Pallins.
The Frigate Saber and two destroyers still capable of firing Enterprise and Manticore lit space with their fire, each targeting an enemy frigate with a powerful missile volley.
The enemy point defenses nailed three missiles but all the others struck home burning holes in each of the enemy frigates, the highly trained cannon crews of the three Icaran warships soon chimed in with their own fire and within seconds one of the enemy frigates exploded in a brilliant golden eruption and another frigate was put completely out of action.
The third frigate died moments later as another missile volley struck her full on and tore her into multiple fragments and fireballs.

The after action report was not good for the Icaran squadron King Roger and Manticore had both been knocked out of action and were forced to retire to Handar base for repair and re-supply leaving only Enterprise and Saber to carry out their assault on the first Fornax base.
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Another series of great stories. Are you using any mod for the actual game you're playing, or is it just stock?
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It's a modified Devnull I added two new weapons that will make late game naval battles much more interesting IMHO and a new ship, but that one will be a suprise for you guys .
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2405.5 Loss of a Hero
6-11 System
“Damn it Captain I don’t care about your opinion on this subject!” Governor Paldwin screamed at Manning so loud his assistant cringed and looked toward the door like she was about to run.
“Governor please, keep your voice down.” Manning said in as calm a voice as he could manage considering he despised the man in front of him, especially since the slime ball had just ordered him and his ship through a warp point leading into enemy space.
“Don’t tell me what to do CAPTAIN! You will take your ship through that warp point and find out who attacked you and destroyed Bounty or I will have you hung!” Paldwin’s voice was cold and hostile but not any quieter, and if he had been a military officer Manning would have challenged him to a duel and killed him outright for threatening him in such a manner.
“Governor you have no authority over whether I am hung or not, and if you threaten me in such a manner again it will not help your position any further.” Manning was about to leave when he heard the clear sound of a slap…Manning whirled around to see the young assistant holding the side of her face, a large red mark on her cheek.
Manning’s hand went immediately to his sidearm before he heard the Governor’s personal guard’s unlock the safeties on their weapons behind him, he slowly slid his hand off his sidearm and grimly acknowledged that all the nasty rumors passing around the Icaran royal court were true, Paldwin was running 6-11 colony like a dictatorship and that meant that the rumors of him using a private army were also likely to be true which meant those two “soldiers” behind him probably wouldn’t hesitate to put a few explosive darts in his back.
“Governor Paldwin……I will take Claw through the warp point if that is what you want….however I am going to need to take some of your staff to act as liaisons.” Manning thought quickly, he needed to get off world and he needed to bring someone with him who could testify to the fact that Paldwin was a dictator, in short he needed Paldwin’s assistant.
“Ah, so you’ve finally come around have you Captain?” The arrogant little man said self importantly as he reevaluated the officer in front of him
“Yes….governor, I suppose we do need to investigate that region, but may I ask that you assign me your assistant as she is more likely to know what you want done M’lord?” Manning attempted to sound cowed into submission ,
The governor rubbed his chin thoughtfully before looking at the young assistant who was still holding her bruised cheek, a wolfish grin crossed the man’s face as he looked back at the naval officer.
“Very well captain you may take her, as well as two of my personal guards to, ah ensure her protection.” Paldwin’s shark like grin grew broader, as if he dared Manning to defy his order that his assistant be accompanied by two of his “soldiers”.
But Manning simply bowed politely and turned to leave.

*****************

Three days later HMS Claw was headed towards the warp point where their sister ship had died with all hands. Manning sat frozen in his command chair as he contemplated the bigger picture which that fool Paldwin did not see, there would be two Navy destroyers coming in system in less then a year to reinforce the security blockade at 6-11 but that idiot wanted to send his only warship straight into enemy space instead of trying to keep them on station to protect his world.
“Sir, we are out of Paldwins’ jurisdiction now.” Commander Tyler whispered to his commander as they reached the 12 light minute range of a non noble Governor’s jurisdiction in a system.
“Commander, execute my orders now please.” Manning whispered back to his friend as he patted the younger man on his shoulder.

********************
Kira Lougheed frowned as she sipped at her coffee noting the two heavily armed guards that never let her leave their site since she had come aboard. She knew all to well that the guards were just mercenaries and that they were there to kill her if she tried to say anything to Captain Manning or any of his people what was going on in Paldwin’s district.
A knock on the door to her quarters made Lougheed jerk out of her thoughts, as she stood to answer it one of her “guards” waved her down and opened the door, the look on the guard’s face made Loguheed cringe and she made sure she accidentally dropped the spoon she had been stirring her coffee with and ducked under her table feigning a search.

A navy officer stood in the doorway and the guard mumbled something at him and attempted to close the door in his face, but the naval officer shoved his hand out and stopped the door saying something that Kira couldn’t quite make out.
A shouting match started shortly there after and Kira noticed the guard still hidden from view reaching for his sidearm, she cowered for a moment before standing up from behind her desk and throwing her mug coffee and all straight at the man’s face. His scream of agony as he started trying to get the fragments of the mug and the burning coffee out of his eyes alerted the navy officer who reached for his own sidearm just a second faster then the other guard.
The whine of a darter pistol and the dull thud of an explosive dart jerked the young woman back to the real world as she saw the guard at the door drop to the deck, a clean hole through his torso and his gun held limply in his dead hand. The navy officer charged into the small room and three marines quickly followed him, two of them rushed over to Kira and shoved her head down as they raced her to the door, Kira briefly caught a glimpse of the third marine slamming a knee into the groin of the other guard and hearing a gurgling scream coming from the room behind her as she was raced down the corridor.
The young woman did not even have enough time to feel fear as she was rushed into the destroyer’s small boat bay. The two marines let her go and the naval officer stepped in front of her, a grimace on his face.
“Ma’am I am Commander Tyler, I know your confused and probably more then a little scared but I need you to follow these two marines into that launch over there and go with the rest of our non essential personnel.” his voice was urgent but calm as he looked around the boat bay to ensure that his people were cramming into the destroyers three launches.
“What’s going on Commander?” Kira asked in a voice who’s calmness surprised even her but the officer just nodded at one of the marines and a firm hand locked around her arm and began almost dragging her towards the third launch in the line “COMMANDER WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!?” she screamed again but the officer simply turned around and rushed for the bay door.
“Relax ma’am I’ve been instructed to explain it all to you once we are aboard the launch.” The marine who had her arm said as he continued to pull her towards the launch.

Less then three minutes later all three launches and 280 navy and marine personnel were on their way to the nearest Icaran naval base, all of them were witnesses essential to building a case against the local governor and Manning expected that they would be the only survivors from his destroyer.
“Is it done Richard?” Captain Manning asked as his commander quietly as the young officer stepped back to stand beside his captain.
“Yes sir, it’s done.” Was the simple reply as the young man took his seat beside the captain's chair.
**********************
Two weeks later the three launches arrived at the Grayson colony and were immediately brought to the naval base, a series of interviews was begun on behalf of the Icaran Royal Court to find out what was really going on in 6-11 system.
Three days after that a messenger drone from HMS Claw showed a video playback of the warship’s Last minutes of life as she attempted to get into scan range of a world at the other end of the warp point she had been blockading. Unfortunately for the destroyer and her crew the enemy world’s weapons systems were long ranged and Claw didn’t stand a chance as she was destroyed at two hundred thousand clicks by an energy weapon of unknown type.

A battle against the Phong
“Commodore Ross, this is Count Aznoble, our scanners show an enemy squadron in system can you confirm?” Aznoble said grimly as he finished tying his bathrobe, and wiped the sleep from his eyes.
“Sir I can confirm, I am preparing to deploy my squadron as we speak.” Ross ‘ voice was calm and professional but Aznoble could tell by the tone that the captain was anxious, he had been given the brevet rank of Commodore unexpectedly so he could take command of the Enterprise Squadron and much to Aznoble’s amusement the captain still flinched at being called Commodore.
“Captain Ross is there anything I can do to assist you?”
“Sir, the best thing you can do for me is get your people into shelters, I’ll try to engage the enemy squadron at three light minutes out and with your permission sir if I can destroy them with minimal damage to my own force I will retrace their vector and see if I can destroy their base.” Ross quiet deadly tone was one Aznoble was not used to hearing and he stood stunned for a moment before nodding to himself.
“Ross do what you think is best, God and Saints be with you.”
“Thank you sir, may God be with us all.” Ross said ominously before cutting the com channel. Ross and Aznoble almost hated each other when Ross first arrived on station, but once they had gotten to know one another and once Aznoble became more sure of himself as Count Handra the two men became friends to their mutual surprise.

Less then a day after the three destroyers and single frigate of his squadron had left orbit of Handra they got a visual of the six Phong frigates and Ross noted that the Phong had actually altered course and speed to engage him directly.
“Sir, enemy will be in missile range in one nine minutes, and cannon range five minutes after that.” The familiar voice of Sarah Pallins chimed in his ear as she passed on the message from tactical.
“Thank you Commander, my compliments to tactical.” The Captain gave his exec a wry grin as he noted that she was passing on a message that he was too busy thinking to himself to hear, and also caught her polite warning to that fact in her tone.

“Captain Fowler, this is flag I want Saber to stay on the tail of our formation, hold your missiles until all three destroyers have fired theirs.” Ross said as he fixed his eyes on the tactical display and saw the six red blips closing fast.
“Aye Commodore, am I to engage with cannons sir?” Fowler’s voice came crisp and calm over the com net and Ross felt a swell of assurance that he had given his old ship to the right officer and had to suppress the smile that was twitching on his lips.
“Negative Fowler, I want you to keep your missiles in this fight until we’ve scored a few hits, let the destroyers get into the cannon duel until the Last minute.”
“Aye sir.” Ross heard the disappointment in her tone as she realized her ship was pretty much the squadron’s reserve and the same pride swelled again, she was an aggressive young Captain and aggressive captains were exactly what he wanted under his command, unforunately she also commanded the smallest ship in the squadron and in a straight up cannon duel she would be hurt the worst.

Nineteen minutes later a mass of blue dots appeared on the holotanks of the Enterprise Squadron signaling a massed volley of missile launches from the Icaran warships.
Enemy point defenses tore through space and 6 of the Icaran missiles died before reaching their targets but Saber’s missiles had popped up from behind their destroyed brethren and all of them slammed into their target knocking one of the Phong Frigates to pieces, leaving it’s point defenses and two engines wrecked.
A second volley of Icaran missiles followed moments later and this time only five Icaran missiles were taken down, the remaining missiles knocked yet another Phong Frigate out of the point defense screen and also removed all but one of it’s engines, and one cannon.
A third volley destroyed it’s target outright as the 4 missiles tore it to pieces sending wreckage across space in a brilliant flash of light.
“This is flag to squadron give them one more volley and close to Cannon range, Saber as we engage with cannons I want you to take out those stragglers with your missiles.” Ross’ voice was the same icy deadly tone that he had the Last time he had gone into combat and Pallins smiled at the familiar tone
The ranges closed fast and the fourth squadron wide volley of missiles blew another frigate apart, the three destroyers reached cannon range of the Last two combat effective frigates, the destroyers [i]Enterprise and King Roger targeted the frigate closing from the left, their concentrated broadsides sent 7 cannon shells into the enemy frigate, turning it into little more then a burning wreck it’s own single cannon broadside missed both destroyers entirely.
Meanwhile Manticore engaged her own target and sent four shells ringing into the forward section of the frigate’s hull tearing out half of the enemy ship’s cannons, the Phong ship returned fire defiantly and scored a single direct hit on the larger Icaran destroyer doing only minute damage.
The single Icaran frigate rushed past the cannon duels going on between her squadron mates and the enemy frigates and fired off yet another volley of her own missiles straight into one of the “stragglers” blowing it into a massive cloud of plasma and wreckage.
Her own cannons finished off the second straggler before it even brought it’s cannon to bare, it’s wrecked hull drifted away.
Enterprise and King Roger fired another concentrated broadside at their target, all eight shells impacted on the frigate’s already shattered hull and the brilliant golden explosion that followed left only one enemy frigate.
The Manticore closed to point blank range on the Last remaining frigate and her four cannon broadside tore the frigate asunder without even an explosion to mark it’s death.

“Sir all enemy frigates have been destroyed!” Sarah Pallins announced cheerfully as the Last red blip on the holotank winked out of existence
The bridge crew relaxed noticeably and smiles were on almost every face, Ross couldn’t help but smile himself as the damage reports showed no damage that could not be repaired in space, casualty reports were equally as good, no dead and only 21 wounded throughout the entire squadron and Doctor Leung the squadron’s senior doctor assured the Captain that the injuries were minor enough to be treated by the squadron’s sick bays.
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Important Worlds of the Icaran Empire:

[i]Planet Icara:
This world was colonized in the late twenty-first century by the Icara/Empire of the Shining Star evacuation fleet after they were driven from the Sol system by the Sol Coalition forces.
Population: 3,216,000,000
Distinguishing Traits:
Icara's capital city "Venture" is one of the few Icaran cities that kept to the old earth design school.
Icara also boasts one of the most active and friendly ecologies of the Empire.

Planet Brandenburg:
Brandenburg was an accidental co-colony of Icara, after a lone ESS transport crashed to it's surface after being thrown through the same stellar anomoly as the rest of the evac fleet, contact was reestablished during the late twenty second century after an Icaran survey craft overflew the planet.
It was fully rehabilitated into the empire in the year 2400 by Countess Percilla Tory.
Population: 1,553,000,000

Distinguishing traits:
Brandenburg's female population outnumbers it's male populace two to one.

Brandenburg also boasts one of the few "pure bred" populations in the Icaran Empire, as the vast bulk of this world's populace is Asian in origin, and fo the most part due to traditions many of the world's population still refuse to intermingle with others not of their race.

Their largest contribution to the armed forces of Icara is female personnel.


Planet Sparta:
Sparta was colonized early in the expansionist years of Icara and her early years were not easy as nearly every life form on the planet-including many plants-were hostile to human life by either proving non-edible or openly predatory against human life.
However the brave colonists eventually learned to thrive on their homeworld and to this day claim they are the toughest Icara has to offer.
Population: 544,000,000

Unique Traits: Every member of Icara's population born to the "first generation" has had a teardrop tatoo beneath their left eye symbolizing that they will never forget the sacrifice of the first colonists from Icara.

Sparta also boasts a large populace of former Brandenburgers who were drafted by the colonization branch of the Icaran government, these colonists unlike many of their counterparts on Brandenburg have since integrating into the general populace of Sparta in part due to the hostile nature of Sparta.

The Spartan Kraken is the largest and most ferocious predator in the known galaxy, being larger then an old earth elephant and brandishing claws and fangs that can rend battle armor in a single swipe.


Planet New Haven:
The exact colonization date of this world is lost to history, it is the former home world and Capital of the Rebel Alliance which surrendered to the Icaran Empire during the early years of expansion.
Population: 4,000,000,000

Unique Traits: Former homeworld of the Rebel Alliance, this world has the largest non "true blood" Icaran population of the Empire.


Planet Mandow:
Homeworld of the Delta Corporation Mandow rules over the entire 6-11 system like it's own private Empire, StateSec troops that are normally seen on Icaran worlds are instead replaced by Delta Corporate Security and many rumors are flying in the Court that the Delta Corporation is building it's own private military force for some sinister reason.
Currently 6-11 and thus Mandow are being "observed" by Icaran Shadowdagger agents.
Population: 8,000,000,000

Unique Traits: Mandow is a semi-autonomous state within the Empire.
The Solstoy shipyards in orbit are rumored to be producing more then just merchantmen and transports, many people say that they are buidling an entire division of SuperDreadnoughts flying the Delta Corporate flag and crewed by ex-pats from several of the conquered star nations in Icara's borders.


Planet New Brisbane:
Colonized after the destruction of the original Handra colony, New Brisbane served as the jumping off point for the Icaran invasion and subjugation of the Phong Federation.
Population: 697,000,000

Unique Traits: Of the 697 million people on New Brisbane 300 million are military personnel or under military employment aboard the two massive orbital shipyards that float above New Brisbane.

Sphereworld: Phong Isolation
The Phong Isolation was the first sphereworld ever constructed by the Icaran empire, it's sole purpose was to isolate the Xeno population from the rest of the Icaran empire.
This massive sphereworld contains a population of 19 billion Phong, and when fully occupied will contain every last Phong in the empire.
It is a grim dark world used as a massive work camp by the Icaran empire, the Phong who live here have nothing but work in their future.
Population: 19 billion and growing.


Sphereworld New Icara:

This mighty construct is totally unlike the Phong sphereworld, it is a glittering jewel in the Icaran home system of Norvor and currently has a population of 12 billion Icarans, including many Andermanian ex-pats which were captured when their colony ships were seized by the new "light raiders" of the navy's Artemis project.
Population 12 billion
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Ahhh a treachorous evil corporation with diabolical plans for domination. Doesn't eveybody galaxy need at least one of those?
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