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Old January 21st, 2004, 12:48 AM
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This is my first game story so please be forgiving if it lacks the luster that I hope to gain later on.
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Pre-History: Once long ago in the year 4,000 BC there rose a great city called Icara in the realm of Greece. Over the Centuries the Icarans became a mighty empire as they conquered Greece and the greater part of the world.
Then in the late twenty-first century the mighty Icaran Commonwealth was challenged by a loose alliance of other nations. After nearly a century of warfare the Icarans were finally defeated in a nuclear attack by these enemies, fleeing the holocust by launching billions of their people into space on massive colony ships the Icarans went through a spacial anomoly that led to a distant star system and their new homeworld.

After three centuries of rebuilding and expansion the Icaran Empire has finally decided to set foot into space once again and to expand their reach beyond their new homeworld to whatever worlds lay beyond the spacial anomolies that led to the warp.

The Decree

2400.1 In the Imperial Palace in Icara city Icara Emepror Leonidas the XVI paced the extravagent tiled floors of his throne room as he calmly listened to his advisors.

Commander Imperial Navy Lord Byron sat calmly in a rare leather chair looking over a flexy pad with a set of schematics on it.
"My lord we can have the first two Hunter class strike vessels in two months with your permission." Lord Byron sounded calm as ever with that same emotionless expression on his face that always irritated the Emperor when he was stressed.

"My lord I suggest we build colony ships first, we have two planets in this system alone that are worth planting mining colonies on, with all respect to my esteemed collegue I doubt our first steps to the stars in over three hundred years should consist of a military mission." the civilian commerce minister stood up as he stressed the word "military" as if it was a curse.

As the Emperor listened to the arguments he finally raised his white gloved hand to silence his two advisors and when it looked as if Minister Plat was about to speak again Leonidas shot him a look that would have made a raging kelecat stop in its tracks. "Plat it is my impression that we would need warships to protect any colonies we planted. I will allow the construction of the first two Hunter class strike ships, then you will have my permission to construct your colony ships." With a spluttering sound from the obviously peeved minister as he sat back down the Emperor walked over to Lord Byron with a slight grin and calmly took the flexy out of the outstreched hand of the Commander of the entire currently non-existent Imperial navy.
"We are currently waiting for an even larger design my Lord, a frigate class ship that can explore further and fight harder should the need arise." For what seemed like the first time in recorded history the gruff old warrior smiled openly as his Emperor looked over a second flexy with the design of a frigate class starship.

2400.2: The first Imperial starship ever built sat in "drydock" above Icara as the personnel shuttles took the 60 man crew to their new home. Among this new crew was the new commanding officer, Brevet Captain Charles Palmer who sat anxiously as his new command came into view.

The INSS Hunter was a small starship about the size of a wet navy frigate and she even loosely resembled the design of water born warship and to the new captain she was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen.
She had five ion engines which made her faster then any of the low orbit vessels that had previously been built by the Icarans. As his shuttle approached her airlock near the middle of the ship Palmer noticed the ships missile tube and suddenly remembered that although his mission was to explore he might just as easily run into a threat that was beyond his comprehension.

As Palmer stepped onto the bridge of his new ship he realized just how much like a wet navy ship she looked, he saw eight stations on the bridge and a command seat located in the center. As he saw his crew settling in Palmer smiled and took his seat.
"Sir we have a message from the Emperor on comns, should I put him on?" the young comns officer sounded nervious as she announced this odd message.

A little annoyed at the foolish question Palmer snapped an affirmative reply to his comns officer. The ships speakers sounded with the booming voice of the Emperor of all Icara and the crew stopped what they were doing and listened intently.

"To the officers and crew of the INSS Hunter, the first starship of the Imperial Navy I give you my greetings. Today you set forth on an adventure the likes of which our people have never before thought possible and with your first brave steps you pave the way for a bright new future for all your people. On behalf of all Icarans I wish you luck and peace on your long journies and to all of you and your families I say be proud for you are true Icarans and you are true pioneers. Farewell and safe journey Emperor Leonidas the sixteenth signing off."

Less then four hours later the ion engines of the Hunter lit and a shooting star was born in the sky over Icara as the blue startup flare streaked across a brilliant night sky and the Hunter left orbit for a universe unknown. In one month she would have left the system and then she would be out of comns range until she returned home after her planned three month journey of exploration.

More to come:
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Old January 21st, 2004, 12:53 AM
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Nice story so far ! I guess it is based on the unmoded SEIV. Then watch out the flood of events after ~ turn 60
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Nope not modded at all....and in this one game I played I only had one true event happen and that was a star going super nova taking out a freshly colonized star system....heh.


Anyway I'd like any comments you guys have to offer.

The Discovery

2400.3: The first mission of the INSS Hunter was underway, she had just entered a star system designated Huju by the astronomical command. Captain Palmer sat calmly in his command seat as he looked at the monitor above his station which currently displayed the number of planets in the system.
"Sir there are no energy signals or any other signs of a civilization, it would appear that this system is uninhabited. However sensors show that there are at least two worlds that have great potential for mining sites. We will know more as we get further in system." The ships science officer announced as he looked over the scans coming into his post on the bridge.

In a slightly disapointed voice Palmer spoke over the flexy in his hand "Thank you mister Mcdougal please send a messenger drone through the warp point back to Icara to inform Command of our discovery. Continue with the survey".

For the next several weeks the Hunter would explore the system and make sure there was no signs of life or anything else that might hint to an alien race.

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Meanwhile back on Icara the second Hunter class ship was built and named Snipe. Even as she left space dock and headed out to explore one of the other warp points in Icaran space a colony ship was under construction at emergency rates.

2400.4: The INSS Hunter had returned to Huju and the Snipe had begun it's survey mission of a system named Velocitas which showed signs of alien ruins that would be helpful to expanding the technology of the Empire.

The Colony ship was finished and quickly colonized the world of Sparta in the Icaran system, this colony would act as a mining base and a spaceyard for the fleet.
The Imperial University had made a tech breakthrough that allowed them to make better missiles and the Hunter and Snipe were going to be retorfit the first possible chance.
Frigate technology was now under research and the first frigates would roll off the lines in four months if production went on schedule.

As soon as the scan of Huju was completed Captain Palmer took the Hunter out towards the third warp point that was scheduled for exploration.

2400.5: This month seemed like normal exploration for Captain Palmer until they finished making the jump into Baksha from the Huju point and alarms began sounding.

"Captain we have energy traces at least one starship is detected on scanners, we also detect at least two inhabited worlds." the tacitcal officer reported calmly as he brought the ships targeting scanners on-line.

"Take us in helm, comns get me a channel to that ship I want to be able to make contact if possible. Mister Reed keep your weapons tracking just in case they aren't in the talking mood." Palmer was excited now, he had finally made contact with an alien race and if they proved friendly he and his crew would be heroes.

After several tense hours the ships finally closed within weapons range, the alien vessel had refused to answer hails and Palmer decided to close with their ship just in case the alien communication tech wasn't as advanced as their own.

"Sir I read two mass driver style depleted uranium cannons on that escort and she has them powered up....I don't think they want to talk sir." Reed reported in his strong Irish accent as he sounded general quarters when the captain nodded.

"Alright let's do this, they are closing with us in at maximum combat speed with weapons charged...I think that constitutes a threat and I am not about to let the Empire be disgraced by a retreat at the first sign of danger...bring targeting scanners on-line and prepare to take that ship out." His voice was tense but the young Captain still heald authority amongst his crew and they obeyed his order to the letter.

Within seconds the enemy ship closed within missile range and the Hunter launched a heavy fusion missile from her tube and opened the range between themselves and hte enemy ship. The first missile struck the enemy escort amidships and knocked out her weapons, as the Hunter closed in for the kill the alien ship attempted to retreat....but it was too late and the third missile finished her off in a brilliant golden explosion.

Palmer ordered his ship back through the warp point to inform command that they had made contact with their first alien race, and that that race was openly hostile towards the Empire....after only five months in space Palmer had to return home with the warning of a possible war and thus return home not as a hero or an explorer but as the man who fired the first shots in a war with an unknown race that had unknwon abilities.
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Wow very nice, wish I could write that good...
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What about 2004.6 what is the response from the high command in response to this alien race that is hostile - an expansion in colonies to give them some power to attack the force on the opposite side of the warp point. Also perhaps a way to bypass that system to search for potential allies ?
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Nice, very nice. Keep them coming!
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Great story! Looking forward to the next episode!
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The Ruling:

2400.6: The Hunter had returned to the Icara system and entered real time voice communication range. The Imperial high command quickly answered the code one secured transmission from the Hunter.

"Commander my lord Byron this is Captain Charles Palmer of the INSS Hunter, I have encountered a hostile alien race and were attacked, I recommend we recall the Snipe and bring the spaceyards at Sparta on-line as soon as possible." Palmer was a little uncomfortable as he spoke into the headset he was wearing.

"Captain, do you have any idea what this race is capable of? Or where they are?" Lord Byron sounded stiff as he spoke in a monotone voice as if he had just received a daily report.

"My Lord I beleive they are a serious threat to the Empire and I recommend we not act until we have more information and...." His voice was cut off as Lord Byron snapped an order at an officer in his headquarters.

"Captain report to base immedietly and do NOT speak of this to anyone until you are in my headquarters under the security act of 2205." Just as Palmer was about to respond the comn channel went dead as he was cut off by Lord Byron.

"Alright helm take us to space dock and secure stations." Palmer snapped as he left the bridge to read a report in his office.

Meanwhile the Imperial high command launched a messenger drone to the Last known location of the INSS Snipe to order it's recall as soon as possible.

Meanwhile a second colony ship had set down on the world of Athens and the mining and spaceyard colony began constructing it's spaceyard.

2400.7: The high command staff had assembled to discuss this threat, as had the lords and Emperor that would make the final decision.

"We should and will muster both the Hunter and the Snipe and deploy on a survey mission in the alien star system and gather what information we can if you permit your majesty." Lord Byron said as he stood up and spoke up over the Minister of transportation and colonization who suggested that the two warships that made up the Icaran navy should only be used to defend Imperial space and to explore other star systems.

"Enough my lords! Commander my Lord Byron I am afraid that I must agree with Minister Tyrel, we should order the Hunter and Snipe to explore the space around us and will regularly ensure that those aliens do not leave their star system to invade our space." Minister of Justice Myrok said as he gingerly flicked a peice of dirt from under his fingernail.

The debates went much like this for many hours as ministers and Admirals argued over the orders, until finally the point had finally been reached, the Emperor decided to agree with the civilian ministers and ordered that until the fleet was stronger this threat would have to wait.

The War Anew

2401.2: Almost a year had passed since the first alien race had been encountered by the newly promoted Fleet Captain Palmer and the Imperial navy had grown to number 15 warships and several space stations, the empire had colonized eight worlds and mots of which had built spaceyards to increase the fleet's numbers.

The threat had not left that alien system and no other aliens had been encountered since that point in time. With a stronger fleet, the Emperor relented and allowed Captain Palmer to command the Imperial First fleet of five warships into the alien system to explore it in more detail.

The first fleet which consisted of the Frigates: Enterprise, Pheonix, Wraith, Tormentor and Sabre had been ordered to strike against the enemy if they still proved to be a threat. Captain Palmer during his first command of a squadron sized element. Aboard his Flagship the Frigate INSS Enterprise the first frigate built by the Empire. Palmer watched as the other four frigates approached the warp point beside his own then with a bright flash and a jerk at the stomach that had become familiar to him and Palmer knew that his squadron was on the other side of the warp point and thus he was in enemy space.

"Captain I detect 4 enemy frigates and a larger alien ship, they are coming towards us at maximum speed and will intercept in approximately four hours." The familiar voice of Reed said almost cheerfully as he analyzed the data in front of him.

"Thank you mister Reed, order the other four ships to assume battle formation. Get me captain Richards of the Pheonix and tell him to take up a position slightly away from that of the rest of the squadron, I want his ship to flank the enemy if possible." Palmer gripped the arm rest of his seat tightly as his fleet approached the enemy squadron which was in equal numbers to his own, yet posessed a ship unknown to his people.

As the battlefleets came together four imperial frigates formed a wall and the Pheonix under captain Richards took up a position further away from the rest of the fleet. The enemy frigates all had the typical DU cannons but the larger ship had six low yeald anti-proton cannons which capabilities were still unknown to the Imperial fleet.

"Sir they are hailing us this time" the comns officer said as she went about translating the alien language.

"Their weapons are still fully powered and they are still at battle speed Captain." reported Reed in a nearly repremanding voice as he added his report to that of the younger comn officer.

"Ensign Polasky what do they have to say?" Palmer said as he held up his hand in a clear sign that he understood Reed's report.

As the comns officer translated and then patched the message through a chill went through all hands on the bridge as the raspy alien voice hissed over the speakers "We are a war squadron of the Borbabra States, surrender your fleet to us or we will destroy all of you....you have five seconds to reply."

With a grimmace on his face Palmer gave the orders to his captains and led his squadron into battle.

The battle began as the Enterprise and the other three ships in the wall fired their fusion missiles towards the enemy ships. As the missile trails rent the space behind them the alien fleet closed in as they tried to get within their own weapons range.
The first two missiles from Enterprise slammed into the hull of an enemy frigates and another two missiles from the Sabre finished her off in a golden explosion that rent space like a nova.
The other four missiles from the other two frigates finished off yet another one of the enemy frigates and another star was born. But the remaining two enemy ships had managed to close the range and the larger alien ship opened fire on the Sabre with it's AP cannons. As the purple beams lit space and burned deep into the hull of the imperial frigate knocking out four of her five engines and killing 20 of her 150 man crew as her hull breached. Yet miraculiously she heald together and the Pheonix which had been ordered to flank the enemy managed to fire off a salvo of fusion missiles into the enemy destroyer knocking out two of her AP cannons and two of her engines.

"Captain Stark of the Sabre reports that his ship is no longer in fighting condition sir, he reports that with your leave he wishes to withdraw his ship from the battle." Polasky sounded upset as the casualty reports came in but her Imperial discipline won out over the fear that struck all of the crew as they heard that the Sabre was nearly crippled and at the mercy of the enemy.

"Very well tell him to fall back, get Captain Riley of the Wraith to bring her ship into position to cover the withdrawal."

Riley barely managed to fire her missiles with those of the Tormentor and Enterprise in time to knock out the enemy frigate that had closed within weapons range of the burning Sabre and would have destroyed the crippled ship. Soon the Enterprise and the two frigates not covering the Sabre opened fire again and their missiles finished off the larger Borbara starship.

Although casualties were minimal Palmer still felt a pang of distress knowing that 20 of his spacers had died this day, and that these were most likely only the first losses of a potentially long war. More importantly his fleet was forced to withdraw from the alien star system because with only four remaining ships he would be unable to fight with any guarantee of success, the war had just begun and the Imperial fleet would soon return in force enough to strike against this brutal enemy.

Meanwhile two frigates named Venture and Hornet met another alien race in the Cephedri system, the only question remaining for them was whether they had met more enemies or whether they had met new friends......more to come.


OOC: The reason I skipped a long period of time is because those few months mainly consisted of colonization programs and exploration missions with the two ships I had and would have made rather dull story. The next chapter probobly won't come until Thursday because I've been buisy but if I can make it before that I will.

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Sorry i havn't posted any more on this story but I'm afraid it came to a sudden and brutal end.

My sun went nova killed my fleet except for three ships and left only a handful of underpopulated colonies which were wiped out in the next wave of alien attacks on my empire.

Sorry again and I hope to start a new story some time soon.
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