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Old August 8th, 2003, 08:26 PM
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Default Re: A War for the Stars

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- I'd add a link to part II at the end of part I (page 4).
The link at the beginning isn't enough? Will do.

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- The footnotes on page 2, part I are sort of silly, you can cut them out if you want (not the others).
Ok.

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- The Last note in the Appendix (month/tenth) is also not necessary, I'd remove it.
Ok.

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- One of the Posts in part II has a note at the bottom (2404.5, I think) which should be removed, it bears no relation to the story itself.
Ok.

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And two questions : part II will have no 'pages', it'll just be one long sequence ?
Actually, I had not added page breaks because I was testing just how much text I could put in each section. And then I went to bed.

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Also, why not '(c) the author, used with permission' ?
I have not figured out where that text comes from.

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It is in the language files. I can make it say that in English, but not in the other Languages (as I do not know how to say that in them ).

[ August 08, 2003, 19:34: Message edited by: Imperator Fyron ]
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