The Walkers, updated 9-28-03

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I read it, and I like it a lot. Perfect stuff to read at work

Your writing is very good, with lots of detail. If I should critisize anything it would be that it had too much detail. As the game grows, there is no way you can be that detailed on everything.

Remember your audience: We all played this game dozens (hundreds) of times, so the interesting stuff is whats different in this game from all the other games. Your race, your interaction with other races, and Last but not least the small snippets of artistery you put in. Things like the stuttering captain makes the story much more readable, while the details on how a T/R agreement work.... well, I knew that from before

Keep up the good work.