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April 7th, 2004, 11:31 AM

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Re: OT: Story Snippet

SOunds like you have some good action going on there. It's a bit confusing out of context though- It's hard to tell which metal-clad figure is which. Maybe you should differentiate them somehow (one taller/ fatter/ different coloured armour/ different voice or something)

Of course they might be robots, built exactly the same...

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