Once Upon The Stars (Updated 08-22-04)

[dogscoff]

I have spent the better part of the day writing and all that I have to show for it is a longer Chapter II of this story. I had hoped that there would have been more hits on this thread than the one that I did get.

Is this story that bad? Or is it like so many other, the victim of dis-interest?

Hey, you know I'm reading it. I didn't read it over the weekend because I wanted to save it for the loong, boring Monday morning at work. And it was worth it, too.

Good to see you re-writing it. The story was great anyway, but I know the feeling of "I wish I'd mentioned XXX 12 chapters ago" all too well. Hopefully the re-write will lead to a tighter story with better continuity.

And it will give me a chance to refresh my memory of events as well. Looking forward to your next post At.