Re: OT: Somebody\'s critique of my story
Good point Puke, I mean almost no one is pure good or pure evil they do what they feel is necessary either to benefit themselves or preserve their people from what they see as the "bad guys". There are of course evil bastards among the Icarans but for the most part they aren't that much different then modern day people in that they are a mix of good qualities and bad.
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