It may well be. I changed the font to New Roman Times. The reduced the pages. Font 10.
You have a major work on your hands, and you've only begun to scratch the surface. Imagine what your whole story will be like once you have completed it.
Your writing is adictive to read to say the least.
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Creator of the Star Trek Mod - AST Mod - 78 Ship Sets - Conquest Mod - Atrocities Star Wars Mod - Galaxy Reborn Mod - and Subterfuge Mod.