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May 12th, 2010, 06:08 AM
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First Lieutenant
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
as someone who is actually familiar with the Japanese culture in general and in Haikus specifically I must say I'm deeply saddened by this thread. there is a huge misconception here it seems of what Haikus really are. Haikus are not just about the 5-7-5 structure, they're about minimalistic language, minimalistic esthetics(beauty) Wabi-Sabi in Japanese, and much more, but I don't want to confuse you guys too much...
also, even if you just go by the structure, without the "soul" of Haikus, than at least add the season element(not the actual season name but a clear yet minimalistic reference to a season), which is as crucial to the Haiku structure as the 5-7-5 format.
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May 12th, 2010, 06:33 AM
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Sergeant
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
*sigh*
Head turns, solar flare
Dry air stirs, passionate heat
Seduce Rakshasi
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May 12th, 2010, 06:37 AM
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Major General
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
This ain't a haiku
According to Blackguard-san
Unless I say "Spring"
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May 12th, 2010, 06:45 AM
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First Lieutenant
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
Quote:
Originally Posted by Gregstrom
This ain't a haiku
According to Blackguard-san
Unless I say "Spring"
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wrong. better luck trying to troll me next time.
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May 12th, 2010, 07:11 AM
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Sergeant
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
Youth lost, cycle ends
Cold heart, white hair, shrill cackle
Old Crone has life yet.
Your turn 13lackGu4rd....
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May 12th, 2010, 07:35 AM
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Sergeant
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
Acashic Record
Lost from view, return anew
Dormant buds yield fruit
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May 12th, 2010, 08:00 AM
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Second Lieutenant
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
Punishment too harsh
Community divided
Ice grows in our hearts
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May 12th, 2010, 08:12 AM
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Private
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
Demon breeds arise!
Spring of cosmic powers flow!
Claim domain again!
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May 14th, 2010, 02:57 PM
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Second Lieutenant
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Re: Post your Dom3 Haiku
life is an art
be it on water or earth
keep this in the heart
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