Attached is a patch for Nosophoros.dm. It handles some spelling, noun-verb agreement, and sentence structure issues. I think that there are still some clauses that need to be delimited by commas, but I left them alone because my judgement is somewhat poor in that area. There are also a couple of gender questions and some singular-plural alternations that I did not address. (I'm a software engineer / physicist, not an English teacher....
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Some additional notes:
- #secondtempshape for Children of the Night might need to be #secondtmpshape, according to the modding manual.
- #stealth for The Chosen One might need to be #stealthy, according to the manual.
- #nametypes for the Skeleton Guard might need to be #nametype, according to the manual.
- Likewise for the other members of the Skeleton family....
- For the Shadow Necromancer, #magicspell is probably supposed to be #magicskill.
I did not change these, but am pointing them out for your review.
Re: [Beta] Nosophoros - The Vampire Lords
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