Once Upon The Stars (old thread)

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December 30th, 2002, 03:07 PM

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Re: Once Upon The Stars (old thread)

Atrocities, The two stories are 'excellent'. Well thought out, extremely interesting, well told and captivating. I have only one criticism. And let me preface that with; I mean no offence in anyway. After all you are the writer. I do not wish to cramp your style. OK, the two stories are very long. Might you make them smaller? Just more of them. It might lead to more people reading and enjoying your work. Just a thought. Again, I mean 'no offence'. I did love reading them, and await further additions!

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