Once Upon The Stars (Updated 08-22-04)

[Siegebreaker]

Awesome.
I need more!!!

[Atrocities]

Not very many people read stories any more.

[Ruatha]

But we are some who eagerly awaits all new episodes....

Good stuff.

Btw, do you want me to spell/grammar check or is it just annoying? (Won't do it anymore..promise)

[ March 09, 2004, 18:28: Message edited by: Ruatha ]

[narf poit chez BOOM]

here and there, occasionally.

that segment was good.

[Atrocities]

Thanks guys.

I am re-writing the whole story as I go, and that is a time consuming process of epic proportions. There are over 80,000 words in this story, and I think I just added another 10,000 in the Last five hours.

It is easy to lose focus of the story when you don't work on it for a long time. Even with good notes, it can be difficult to get back into it.

I hope the re-write clears up a lot of grey areas and adds more depth and character development to the story.

[CNCRaymond]

A nice read. Good work. Look forward to reading more soon.

[Atrocities]

Prelude