Once Upon The Stars (Updated 08-22-04)

Atrocities · #1 March 9th, 2004, 11:20 PM

Thanks guys.

I am re-writing the whole story as I go, and that is a time consuming process of epic proportions. There are over 80,000 words in this story, and I think I just added another 10,000 in the Last five hours.

It is easy to lose focus of the story when you don't work on it for a long time. Even with good notes, it can be difficult to get back into it.

I hope the re-write clears up a lot of grey areas and adds more depth and character development to the story.

CNCRaymond · #2 March 10th, 2004, 12:20 AM

A nice read. Good work. Look forward to reading more soon.

Atrocities · #3 March 10th, 2004, 03:40 AM

Prelude

dogscoff · #4 March 10th, 2004, 08:48 AM

Oh yeah, this will keep me happy for a while. nice work At.

Atrocities · #5 March 12th, 2004, 05:13 AM

Any one read the new prelude?

dogscoff · #6 March 12th, 2004, 10:11 AM

Yeah, I read it. brilliant. Once you have the entire story up I'll take an afternoon off to read it. BTW, check your PM.

Ruatha · #7 March 12th, 2004, 11:55 AM

Not yet, but I will.