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April 10th, 2003, 08:52 PM
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Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
I like your sytle... especially how you blended in tangible game components. Related it to the gaming experience very well.
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April 10th, 2003, 09:29 PM
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Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
Nice read. Looking forward to more.
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April 10th, 2003, 09:33 PM
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Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
I'm suprised i got two favourable reviews as i believe this isn't as strong as other chapters i've written so hopefully they'll be enjoyable to read. I was nervous about posting this as it is my least favourite chapter. Thanx for the support
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April 10th, 2003, 11:03 PM
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Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
Finally got a minute or two to read the story.
Great job RD. I liked that chapter alot, and if you say that was the worst chapter that you have written; I can't wait for the next ones! This looks like it will be a great story indeed.
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I think...therefore I am confused.
They were armed. With guns, said Omari.
Canadians. With guns. And a warship. What is this world coming to?
The dreaded derelict dwelling two ton devil bunny!
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April 10th, 2003, 11:14 PM
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First Lieutenant
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LOL... you are certainly a contender! Lots of talent in the forums as well. I have to catch up with some of the other authors' work too. A nice diVersion indeed.
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April 11th, 2003, 12:22 AM
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Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
Primitive read story, Primitive like story, Primitive want more.
Mr. Deathstar better not let Primitive wait to long
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April 14th, 2003, 01:46 AM
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Re: The Liberation of Tamarr
Yep, It's good.
Heavier on the scenic description than the aliens thoughts and emotions. But as they all died it would have been a bad investment to build up the characters
The headline "Liebration of Tamarr" makes me wonder, will it be conquered and then liberated by the Tamerrians or will the Taerons "liberate" it?
I will read the rest of the story aswell!
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