Re: this is a thread to attract SE4 forumers to the first Dungeon Oddessy roleplay thread
Perhaps it would help if you took a break from action for a bit, and painted the scene as a still. Sure, we know we are in a cave, with a well, a broken pump, some shelving, et cetera - but how big is it? What's it smell like? How are things arranged? What color are the walls? Are they finished? What's the texture? Are they rock? What type? Are there patterns in it? How are the bandits dressed? What weapons do they carry? Armor? The mages? Robes? What do they look like? Color? Symbols? Staves? Where is everyone in relation to everyone else? Make the scene come alive in your head, then take a few pages to describe it in type.
Her Majesty's Wizard - that's a good one. I haven't read Count Scar however.
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Of course, by the time I finish this post, it will already be obsolete. C'est la vie.
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