The Trillian Empire

Atrocities · #1 June 18th, 2003, 11:19 PM

Clark this is a very nice start.

Soon we will have to sell subscriptions to this forum with all of the great stories here.

Good work, nice easy to read format.

Enjoyable to.

I would also like to say that this is an excellent start to a story. Very inspiring to read.

[ June 18, 2003, 22:28: Message edited by: Atrocities ]

Ragnarok · #2 June 18th, 2003, 11:38 PM

Clark, I just want to say great job! This was a very well written chapter to your new story. You did a great job making the characters sound real and react just as we would in that particular situation.

I most certainly look forward to the next chapter!

primitive · #3 June 18th, 2003, 11:45 PM

Great writing. You sure work fast

Captain Kwok · #4 June 18th, 2003, 11:56 PM

Hmm. I wonder if this 'Trillian' race made this fine product I use to combine all my messenger programs into one package?

DeadZone · #5 June 19th, 2003, 12:14 AM

yes... just maybe...

Damn wot an intellencient species

minipol · #6 June 19th, 2003, 12:35 AM

I enjoyed reading this.
Just out of curiosity clark: do you have any experience in writing Novels?

Oh, just had a thought ( i know, doesn't happen very often and when it does they usually aren't any good

): maybe Aaron will bundle these novells on the cd of SEV when it comes out. Provides more interesting reading than the manual

[ June 18, 2003, 23:37: Message edited by: minipol ]

sachmo · #7 June 19th, 2003, 12:39 AM

Great! Jumping in with both feet, I see. Are you playing a game along with this story, or are you just using your imagination?