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Old June 18th, 2003, 11:19 PM
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Clark this is a very nice start. Soon we will have to sell subscriptions to this forum with all of the great stories here.

Good work, nice easy to read format. Enjoyable to.

I would also like to say that this is an excellent start to a story. Very inspiring to read.

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Old June 18th, 2003, 11:38 PM
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Clark, I just want to say great job! This was a very well written chapter to your new story. You did a great job making the characters sound real and react just as we would in that particular situation.

I most certainly look forward to the next chapter!
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Old June 18th, 2003, 11:45 PM
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Great writing. You sure work fast
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Old June 18th, 2003, 11:56 PM
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Hmm. I wonder if this 'Trillian' race made this fine product I use to combine all my messenger programs into one package?
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yes... just maybe...

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Old June 19th, 2003, 12:35 AM
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I enjoyed reading this.
Just out of curiosity clark: do you have any experience in writing Novels?

Oh, just had a thought ( i know, doesn't happen very often and when it does they usually aren't any good ): maybe Aaron will bundle these novells on the cd of SEV when it comes out. Provides more interesting reading than the manual

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Great! Jumping in with both feet, I see. Are you playing a game along with this story, or are you just using your imagination?
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