I Finally Did It

Fyron · #1 November 18th, 2003, 03:27 AM

It looks like a 4 story building on top of the asteroid... if it were 4 stories on a world ship, it would be a mere dot with that sized image. Think small moon. Maybe it could look like a small city on top of that thing?

CNCRaymond · #2 November 18th, 2003, 03:59 AM

Thanks for the feed back you two.

Which of the two do you like the most?

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Fyron · #3 November 18th, 2003, 04:08 AM

I like the left one better...

The front "gear" piece looks like the asteroid is phasing through it or something, as they overlap on both the left side of and the top of that one "spoke". Or the top and right, depending on the perspective you look at it from.

I still think you should add many tiny grey structures on the top (or maybe a few

) to make it look more massive. Kind of like how the death star looks almost like a city when you get close to the surface. Or keep it like that.

CNCRaymond · #4 November 18th, 2003, 04:36 AM

Could someone please do me a favor and sort these names for me. I tried but this computer has Word Perfect on it and word perfect does not sort individual names. (Word Perfect is a horrible program. Completely useless.)

http://www.astmod.com/cnc/Kaelon.txt

I wrote an html program to randomly generate names and this was the first batch.

Working site for the race is at www.astmod.com/cnc/Kaelon.htm for those of you who would like to see it. PS, it is also a neo standard set as well.

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Captain Kwok · #5 November 18th, 2003, 05:04 AM

Just cut and paste to MS Excel or a spreadsheet equivalent and then sort - then cut and paste back to notepad etc.

Narratio · #6 November 18th, 2003, 05:14 AM

Sorted and emailed to you

CNCRaymond · #7 November 18th, 2003, 05:26 AM

Thank you both.

how does this one look?

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