Brief story...

sachmo · #1 May 28th, 2004, 05:27 PM

Neat!

dogscoff · #2 May 28th, 2004, 06:49 PM

Good stuff. More! You should wrrite something from the point of view of the other side...

Slynky · #3 May 29th, 2004, 02:19 AM

I think it's well written. It was quite interesting. (glad to see it wasn't from my current game with you

, though I suppose the way things are going i COULD be the target of such a piece)

Joachim · #4 May 30th, 2004, 01:12 AM

Thanks for the kind comments

I have since done the turn and the very actions described...... As for the other side I'll leave that to the 'victims'

Raging Deadstar · #5 May 30th, 2004, 12:15 PM

Only just got round to reading this and it's a great short story. We've all had to incinerate a homeworld at one point

Would you be willing for me to put this up On Spaceempires.net in the fanfiction section?

Joachim · #6 May 30th, 2004, 12:42 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Raging Deadstar:
Only just got round to reading this and it's a great short story. We've all had to incinerate a homeworld at one point

Would you be willing for me to put this up On Spaceempires.net in the fanfiction section?

Yep, no problemo.

Renegade 13 · #7 May 30th, 2004, 05:18 PM

Great story man!

I wish I had enough talent (and time) to do something like that.