Skill Cards - The NEW Look

Mark H. Walker · #1 November 27th, 2002, 11:41 AM

Hi All,

The new card does look good. And my grammar could be better. Of course the grammar is "beta."

Psitticine I'd love for you to take a look at the card text. Bamse has it right now, but would you like to have a shot at it after that?

Best,
Mark

Psitticine · #2 November 30th, 2002, 05:58 AM

Sure, I'd be happy to give it a go-over.

Jaeger · #3 December 9th, 2002, 07:50 PM

I have never seen "an LOS" used anywhere before. I have only seen "a LOS" but I much prefer simply "LOS" without "an" or "a" in front. So you would say:"A soldier with LOS to an enemy". I think it sounds better that way. That's just my opinion.

Another thing about grammar:
I believe the correct way to spell the title is: "Lock'n'Load" i.e. with 2 apostrophs and a small "n". The grammar of a title is really important so please check this out before publishing.

...English is not my native tongue so I might be wrong but I just wanted to share my opinion for the best of this exciting game.

Splusmer · #4 December 10th, 2002, 04:27 AM

Jaeger's right--the correct form would be "Lock 'n' Load"

(Mark runs screaming in horror as one of the Ghosts of Editors Past comes back to haunt him...

Of course, if you promise to do Falklands next I might not ever make editorial corrections again...

[ December 10, 2002, 02:31: Message edited by: Splusmer ]

Mark H. Walker · #5 December 11th, 2002, 07:31 PM

Hi Scott,

Now I'm seeing you everywhere. Hey, you were always my favorite CGS+ editor... at least you answered my emails.

Best,
Mark