Critique this design, please

[apoger]

If you are trying to exploit the Heart Companions then I'd suggest losing the Oracle and taking a Red Dragon with fire-9. The added attack skill and flaming weapons will help the Heart Companions more than twist fate/MR. Also the dragon can help early game expansion.

You can saftly take some misfortune if you have Order +3.


>I probably made some stupid error

Not stupid at all. In fact you are thinking clearly for a new player. Plus asking for help will get you far, as the Dom community is very helpful.

If you plan on building a strategy around bless effects you need to mold your production and dominion around it to. Not only is getting your magic up expensive, but you need to have the right scales to mass produce them for their purpose and then dominon to make them as often as you need.