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October 28th, 2004, 12:04 AM
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Re: Need advice from FanFic writers
Sorry for the double post.
Oh and I'd like to know what people just reading the story think about it even if they've never written their own fiction.
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October 28th, 2004, 12:09 AM
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Re: Need advice from FanFic writers
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October 28th, 2004, 12:16 AM
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Re: Need advice from FanFic writers
I don't think I'm nearly good enough to go there  Though I'll take a look and see if they have any writing tips.
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When life gives you lemons take them and squeeze them in life's eye until it gives you the oranges you asked for!
"If men build things to look like our penis such as towers and ships does that mean female achitects represent women having penis envy?"
A line that made me chuckle, I can't remember where I heard it I just know it made me laugh.
"I'm not really a slapper....I mainly punch and gouge."
Tammy Lee my kung fu instructor/sifu's daughter when asked if she ever slapped a boy for saying something nasty to her.
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October 28th, 2004, 01:26 AM
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Re: Need advice from FanFic writers
Sounds good, and the game events will make it somewhat linked together. Maybe play the empire in a way conducive to the story...? For example, a real peaceful race wouldn't glass planets at all.
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October 28th, 2004, 01:29 AM
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Re: Need advice from FanFic writers
Hmmmmm good advice, thank you  .
Anymore from you guys your a smart lot so I'm willing to listen 
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When life gives you lemons take them and squeeze them in life's eye until it gives you the oranges you asked for!
"If men build things to look like our penis such as towers and ships does that mean female achitects represent women having penis envy?"
A line that made me chuckle, I can't remember where I heard it I just know it made me laugh.
"I'm not really a slapper....I mainly punch and gouge."
Tammy Lee my kung fu instructor/sifu's daughter when asked if she ever slapped a boy for saying something nasty to her.
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October 28th, 2004, 01:39 AM
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Re: Need advice from FanFic writers
Most of us use the notes system for our stories. 
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October 28th, 2004, 01:47 AM
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Re: Need advice from FanFic writers
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Hmmmmm good advice, thank you .
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who me? smart?
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October 28th, 2004, 04:39 PM
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Re: Need advice from FanFic writers
Well I for one am enjoying your game story very much. Plot, story line, and characters seem to be developing nicely. Looking forward to future installments.
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