OT: Somebody's critique of my story

[Starhawk]

Good point Puke, I mean almost no one is pure good or pure evil they do what they feel is necessary either to benefit themselves or preserve their people from what they see as the "bad guys". There are of course evil bastards among the Icarans but for the most part they aren't that much different then modern day people in that they are a mix of good qualities and bad.

[tesco samoa]

You might not like his points.... But remember this he is reading your stories. And taking the time to actually write you in the attempt to help you. Perhaps you should take these points and ask someone else who has not read your story to read it and see if they notice these things. Do something constructive with it instead of what your doing now.

[Starhawk]

Or better yet get the oppinions of people who HAVE read my story and see if they can find these problems in my story....like I did and yah know what it worked fine so far and most of his "problems" these folks have even stated are just nitpicks.

As far as his legitimate points go well then the kind folks here pointed those out as well except they also gave advice on how to fix it not just belching out insulting rhetoric.

There is a difference in pointing out errors and solutions with those errors and just pointing out pet peeves.