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May 5th, 2005, 05:35 PM
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Re: Ocelots Rampant (Game Story)
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You lucky people! So a bit more expermentation with style and enough commas (hopefully  ) Given the lack of response (and readers) from last time I'm not expectin much but here goes. Comments would be nice, even if they just say 'For the love of God stop posting this rubbish'
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I love this stuff Phil keep it coming after I read through the whole thing when I posted it on my site I got hooked.
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May 5th, 2005, 11:48 PM
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Re: Ocelots Rampant (Game Story)
It's good. That last bit was funny. Just not enough feeling of tension/desperation.
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May 6th, 2005, 04:24 AM
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Re: Ocelots Rampant (Game Story)
I'll be coming back to Sainte in the next bit. I've decided to go for leaving things hanging and not neatly wrapping up at the end of a chapter.
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May 6th, 2005, 12:13 PM
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Re: Ocelots Rampant (Game Story)
Please start double spacing your paragraphs!
Like this!
And this!
Not This
And this!
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May 6th, 2005, 12:24 PM
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Re: Ocelots Rampant (Game Story)
OK I am missing something. I have no idea what on earth you are talking about. If I stick a double space in it just looks plain ridiculous:
Like this
And this.
Which is a silly chasm, of course it could be different on your screen. So what your calling a double space I see as a quadruple space.
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May 6th, 2005, 01:13 PM
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Re: Ocelots Rampant (Game Story)
"single space" is one line break.
line 1
line 2
line 3
"double space" is two line breaks.
line 1
line 2
line 3
"quadruple space" would be 4 line breaks.
line 1
line 2
line 3
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May 6th, 2005, 01:21 PM
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Re: Ocelots Rampant (Game Story)
Hmm so I am double spacing it. Frankly I am still confused.
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