Re: OT: Hell is For Heroes.
sell it with sex, baby. sell it with sex.
while "oh no we died" had me in stitches, there does seem to be some scruffy continuity in this one. one of the girls had quite a bit of awake time and didnt manage to find emergency power or lights with it.
Another one woke up about 15 minutes before Kagan, so his response to (what you would presume is her imediate reaction) "oh no we died" seems misplaced. he should have been alseep for that.
but im just being picky. the flow and witicisms are, as always, superb.
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