Quote:
Tortanick said:
Nice work I look forward to seeing it.
The first paragraph could use some improvement though, I'd add a bit more details about their ancient history and deffentately remove the word "pretender" and "wishes to assend to godhood" the first one is never mentioned in nation descriptions because the nation allways believe their god is allready a true god. And we all know he wishes to assend
|
Good points, to be honest a few other things bother me about the description as well. I speak of a hierarchy of tribes, and then I talk about them being equal. And also the end sentence where I speak of the animal ancestors lured to the potlatch. I can do better than that.
I think I am going to change the description and have it go into more detail about the Potlatch. Also I will have it told more from their point of view like you suggest, replacing pretender with a word that feels like they believe this is the real god.
Thanks again for the great comments, here is screenshot of a new pretender...
(Graphics come from Age of Wonders and Civ3, Retouched and recolored a bit. Final release of the mod will have a version that uses existing dominions 3 graphics so people can choose.)