Othaglot and Cane - Story Thread

Rollo · #1 February 12th, 2003, 11:43 AM

yes, yes.

woah! what a cliffhanger (*again*).
quick, post chapters 19&20...

I will reserve my 'hah, i knew it!' comments for later or email conversations

mlmbd · #2 February 12th, 2003, 03:01 PM

dogscoff, I had not been on to read this before. Chapter 18 is, most enjoyable! I too await for the next addition.

mlmbd

Baron Munchausen · #3 March 6th, 2003, 04:52 AM

So where's the next installment?

dogscoff · #4 March 6th, 2003, 12:55 PM

uhhh... in development.

Truth be told, my creative energies have been going more into graphics than words lately, since I recently got myself a graphics tablet and have been doing race portraits for people and infantry pics for the neo-expansion pack.

Also, I've got a really compelling solo Proportions game on the go just now.

Anyway, O&C are always at the back of my mind, and ideas gradually build up into a little pile there. When the pile gets too big, it spills over and I have to start writing to catch all the thoughts.

My pile is fairly full at the moment, so maybe I'll try to get chapter 19 finished this afternoon.

I also have a totally unrelated sci-fi project building up at the back of my mind too, and I have to discipline myself to direct my energies toward O&C and not that. I find it really hard to write just one story at a time=-)

dogscoff · #5 March 7th, 2003, 01:13 AM

OK, after slaving all day... chapter 19 is up. Just click the banner in my sig.

Feedback please...

primitive · #6 March 7th, 2003, 01:55 AM

Two thumbs (tentacles) up.

Baron Munchausen · #7 March 7th, 2003, 03:29 AM

Nice as it is, but incongrous. The story is already a bit fragmented by the leaping between narrators, but this is out of place after the arrival on the Marilyn has already been described, and we were left with the cliff-hanger of an obvious attack. Move this to chapter 16 or something?

[ March 07, 2003, 01:31: Message edited by: Baron Munchausen ]