Re: OEM - Ocenania Enchanment mod v0.7
At first look Burn, great job!
How about this edit for the triton queen:
"The Triton Queens once were the most beautiful of all sea-dwelling creatures, gifted with healing and future-seeing. Vain, and capricious they grew ever more licentious and ever more desirous of adulation and worship. When the known world groaned under the weight of their monstrous progeny, the Pantokrator decreed that evermore their outside appearance would mark their inner beauty. Horribly disfigured, the Triton Queens fled to the dark deeps, where they could not see their own disgusting forms. With malicious aeons spent in the deeps, they have taken up sorcery in their vain quest for redemption and revenge - to no avail. For even amputation fails; the curse persists until once more the queen reflects her heart. This Triton Queen has decided to serve the awakening god, hoping that he could lift the curse when he rises to the Throne of the World."
also, there is a persistent mispelling: ambiphibian should be amphibian
Last edited by chrispedersen; May 28th, 2009 at 12:31 PM..
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