"Malpractice"

Suicide Junkie · #1 June 19th, 2002, 02:10 AM

Yes, definitely keep the story together, otherwise it will be lost in the neverending flow of threads. I reccommend editing the post, and adding your first chapter in.

Wardad · #2 June 19th, 2002, 02:20 AM

I don't have time for it. But, Just couldn't stop reading it. Good Job.

Cylapse · #3 June 19th, 2002, 02:40 AM

Yeah it hit me... I went in to read it as if a random person, and the beginning conversation doesnt pick up well when pretending Ive never read Deck 12. Good points, thanks to all of ya...

(And Spoo, its really 3 of 3 but #1 was about other characters, etc)

Thanks for reading *g* I cant stop writing, especially at that slave factory I work at LOL. I will end up upheaving and placing into a seperate thread, thanks again. .