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Old August 13th, 2002, 12:18 PM
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Very nice read. I wanted to know, so I checked.

Close Estimate:

Words = 48353
Characters = 228211
Sentances = 3724

Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level = 6.9
Flesch Reading Ease = 68.4

Font 10
Times New Roman = 64 pages.

I would say that you are off and running on that book.
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Old August 13th, 2002, 12:38 PM

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Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level = 6.9
Flesch Reading Ease = 68.4
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Old August 13th, 2002, 02:09 PM

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Originally posted by Atrocities:
Very nice read. I wanted to know, so I checked.

Close Estimate:

Words = 48353
Characters = 228211
Sentances = 3724

Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level = 6.9
Flesch Reading Ease = 68.4

Font 10
Times New Roman = 64 pages.

I would say that you are off and running on that book.
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Old August 13th, 2002, 03:36 PM
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Default Re: Rise of the Remorhaz Society

And a Wow for sachmo .
Moderators: can we make a sticky of this tread.
Because this will give everyone a lesson in how to roleplay in SEIV

Thanks sachmo

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http://www.geocities.com/hohoho611ca/storylinks.html

You should post a link to this thread in the "Classic Threads" thread.
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Although I enjoy this story, I feel that you should take some time and proof read your work.
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Old August 13th, 2002, 05:21 PM

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Although I enjoy this story, I feel that you should take some time and proof read your work.
You are right, but I like to take the limited time that I have to play the game and write the story. Since this is just for fun, I was hoping that most people would overlook the gramatical and spelling errors. BTW, you did much better this time...I'm proud of you.
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