Re: Pax Malazica.
I've played around with this a bit, and I like it over all.
I do have a few comments right now, about Coltaine.
He autosummons dogs and men. I think I personally would prefer if he would summon them via "Summon allies", but either way works. I also think 5 dogs, especially autosummons, is one or two too many.
Finally, something that I assume is a bug (even though I've only read two books in the series) - the dogs that follow Coltaine seems to be Lamias. When they die, they transform into Lamias - not intentional I presume?
Good work - here's hoping you finish this one day!
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