Specific vs common sensors ?

[tbontob]

Hey guys!

I haven't received any critiques on my presentation! Is it that good, that nothing more can be said about it? Or is it so bad, nobody wants to touch it with a ten foot pole?

Have some ideas about adding some explanatory notes. But before I do that, I'd like to know if it more or less accomplishes my objective - giving the newbie a basic knowledge on selecting the sensors that are available to him for installation in his ships and specifically which sensors are shared.

So some feedback (negative or positive) would be appreciated.