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Re: Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!
Rags, koodoos, congratulations, bravo, cheers and some I missed. Great story! More than worth waiting for.
I do see where capnq is talking about. The time where you leave off, and pickup two weeks later. I by the way didn't mind.
Again, WELL DONE! WELL DONE, INDEED!
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Re: Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!
Ohhh, ok this part?
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Is that where you speak of?
Since you guys feel that there is a chunk missing I shall write some stuff in real quick. I'll post it when I have it done.
Oh! And thanks for the feedback mlmbd. Glad you enjoyed it! 
Edit: Ok, I added some more to it. It's nothing major but it sort of fills that time space. I put in italics what I added. Hope that's better!
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I think...therefore I am confused.
They were armed. With guns, said Omari.
Canadians. With guns. And a warship. What is this world coming to?
The dreaded derelict dwelling two ton devil bunny!
Every ship can be a minesweeper... Once
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Re: Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!
rags, yep that's it. The addition might be fluff, but it is a very smooth bridge. Excellent, if I do say so myself. And I do!!
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Re: Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!
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 Curiouser and curiouser...
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We could finally see whether or not Qullum Sr. was right about this stuff. We owe him that much for dedicating his life to this project.
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It looks to me like your italics are only about 1/8th of what I thought was missing before.
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Re: Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!
Ok, I must have messed up when I copied and pasted it the first time and it just slipped by me. Sorry about that. Shouldn't happen again.
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Ragnarok - Hevordian Story Thread
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I think...therefore I am confused.
They were armed. With guns, said Omari.
Canadians. With guns. And a warship. What is this world coming to?
The dreaded derelict dwelling two ton devil bunny!
Every ship can be a minesweeper... Once
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Re: Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!
rags, let's make sure you don't!
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Re: Hevordah Imperium - Story thread - Updated 6-13-03!
Bada Bump!
Well... guess what?! If all goes well I will have the next story posted by tomorrow sometime. If it goes even better I will have it done by tonight. But write now I am writing like crazy and it is proving to be a long chapter and a good one at that. (At least by my standards  )
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Ragnarok - Hevordian Story Thread
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I think...therefore I am confused.
They were armed. With guns, said Omari.
Canadians. With guns. And a warship. What is this world coming to?
The dreaded derelict dwelling two ton devil bunny!
Every ship can be a minesweeper... Once
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