Clockwork assassin: good idea
Multiple attacks: good idea
Paralyze/Stun attacks: bad idea
AN main attack: bad idea
x2 damage against undead: bad idea
Assassination on an assassin: good idea
(seriously clockwork being hack with blades, not AN blades but AP blades which do damage and don't stun and certainly have no thematic reason to do more damage to undead.)
If he's to be SC material low def and low HP will be quite a hit on him though.. but all could easily be balanced to get him on the right tier.
To stay in the clockwork scene clockwork harvester with those nice scyting wheels in front (you know the one they uses now adays on big fields) trampling over armies

Or Clockwork Elephant.
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